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Treephoria

As my roots grow deeper I find my reach extends further Nourishment I draw from the soil clothes me in splendid garments My branches stretch towards the sky so that I may embrace the sun The moon is my night time companion Stars come out to express their delight I am shelter to the small The strong perch high on my branches Magical creatures have made me their home So I have vowed to keep them safe In anticipation of Fall's arrival I adorn myself with magnificent colors Knowing I will soon be left naked Seduced by Autumn's winds There is no reason to fear for me For within my core there is warmth Soon Winter will blanket me in white She will crown me with ice crystals for I am of Noble Birth!

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Inga Mannion

Date: 10/27/2023 5:06:00 PM

Your poem is lovely! Thank you for sharing!

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 5/19/2019 6:07:00 AM

Wonderful to see your tree transforming for each season. I love my oak trees so am faving this one, SuZ

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/19/2019 7:24:00 AM

Thanks SuZ

Vladislav Raven

Date: 11/2/2018 4:21:00 AM

Hi Richard, this is such a beautiful write. Being a tree lover, this poetic gem does sing into my heart and I feel such joy as I read your excellent words. You give such life and vibrance to the tree, it is alive with the wonder of your words. Once again you make my heart sing. A towering fave my friend. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/2/2018 8:46:00 AM

Thanks so much Mike.

Ronald A. Williams

Date: 1/13/2018 1:56:00 PM

Very lovely personification. Very inspiring write.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 12/24/2017 2:53:00 PM

A wonderful poem and beautifully described, Richard... How appropriate to read a poem about trees on Christmas Eve when they are so much a part of the holiday... A Merry Christmas to you and I wish you all the best for the New Year!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/24/2017 2:56:00 PM

THanks so much for the Christmas greeting. All the best to you as well Kelly.

Chris Hagy

Date: 12/21/2017 7:55:00 PM

Great write Richard:) I adore nature and also this piece! :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/22/2017 8:20:00 AM

Thanks Chris.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/14/2017 4:36:00 PM

A lovely personification with a superb ending, Richard. A tree that knows where she stands, what her role in life is. Most of all, she is strong and determined to make the most of what she's been gifted with. ~ Best regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/22/2017 8:21:00 AM

What a great comment, thanks Paul.

Becca Teagan

Date: 12/12/2017 8:40:00 AM

I forgot about this one when I posted my tree poem! Quite the contrast! This is so beautiful. THIS is what an oak tree should be! Shelter to the small.... vowing to keep them safe. Faving this one.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/12/2017 2:28:00 PM

Thanks Becca. ;0)

Punnia Viswan Bhatia

Date: 12/11/2017 10:13:00 AM

"Knowing I will soon be left naked Seduced by autumn's winds" love this expression!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/12/2017 2:29:00 PM

Thanks for the visit.

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 12/10/2017 5:02:00 PM

Lovely tribute to a beautiful creation.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/12/2017 2:30:00 PM

Thanks Rhoda.

Anna Hopper

Date: 12/10/2017 1:35:00 PM

Beautifully written and expressed

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/12/2017 2:30:00 PM

Thanks Anna.

Silent One

Date: 12/10/2017 1:22:00 PM

Very deep Richard..

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/12/2017 2:30:00 PM

Thanks Silent.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/10/2017 10:41:00 AM

Hi, Richard...my brother is traveling to Canada on Friday. I don't know if I told you, but they live about ten minutes away from where you live. Wish I were going with him. :) Maybe this summer. Hugs

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/10/2017 11:28:00 AM

:) I'll pass the message....see if he can manage to swing by. He's there for the holidays to see the wife and kids.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/10/2017 10:44:00 AM

Have him drop by and visit me at Jaguar Land Rover on Leathead. Hugs back to you. I hope you make it here in the summer!

Winged Warrior

Date: 12/10/2017 5:03:00 AM

Nice depiction of how the emotions of a tree branch out...I'm a tree hugger lol...god bless and happy holidays Richard...hopefully our Canadian winter will be merciful lol...^WW^

Winged Warrior
Date: 12/10/2017 2:11:00 PM

Maple, Ontario my friend...just north of Toronto...^WW^

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/10/2017 9:59:00 AM

I hope so too. Which part of Canada do you live in?

Becca Teagan

Date: 12/9/2017 10:49:00 PM

I love the majestic feel to this... my favorite part is "I adorn myself with magnificent colors Knowing I will soon be left naked Seduced by Autumn's winds"

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/10/2017 9:59:00 AM

Thanks Becca, that is my favorite part as well.

Unfamiliar Flower

Date: 12/9/2017 4:38:00 PM

Very nice poem !! Enjoy reading it :)

Unfamiliar Flower
Date: 12/10/2017 3:07:00 PM

thank you always for your visit :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/10/2017 10:01:00 AM

Thanks Antonia, have you written anything new? I will pop by and visit shortly.

Akkina Downing

Date: 12/8/2017 3:50:00 PM

Awe how lovely this is. Richard I adore this piece and thank you for sharing. Beautiful! Hugs and smiles :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/10/2017 10:01:00 AM

Thanks for the visit, smile and hugs.

Elaine George

Date: 12/8/2017 11:31:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful! Richard. Thank you for sharing.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/10/2017 10:02:00 AM

My pleasure Elaine.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/8/2017 10:12:00 AM

Yes, whether personification or reality...you are noble indeed, dear. Lovely poem. :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/10/2017 10:02:00 AM

You are sweet Eileen.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/8/2017 8:13:00 AM

Majestic poetry, Richard. The personification was so pastoral and expressed w/nature's enchanting elegance. Very enjoyable read. Loved the last line ... a regal kicker. A mighty fine piece of prose. Love and joy always.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/10/2017 10:03:00 AM

Love back to you my friend.