Tree

 
I will reach my roots deep into the solid mass of Earth, down into the sweet concrete of life. Beside a blue rippling stream I will rest and birds will make their nest in my branches. A gentle wind will whisper through my emerald and I will stand a proud and strong and solid soul. No storm will ever topple me from my firm foundation, no ax will find me as I am hidden deep in a tangled woods. Only the sun and clouds know my name when I call to them. At my base purple violets grow each Spring it seems, and in the Fall I am so lovely with my leaves of ruby red. Oh yes, I love my winter coat of soft snow white and ice, But in Spring, oh Spring that is when my roots go deep, deeper and deeper, further and further in the soil. And I am mighty and I am strong all summer long, listening to the sweet chirping and twittering of baby birds and the touch of butterflies. Perhaps, you will find me, and come rest beneath me one day just you me and shade on a warm summer day. _________________________ March 24, 2018 Poetry/Concrete/Tree Copyright Protected, ID 03-1306-908-24 All Rights Reserved, 2018, Constance La France Submitted in the Standard contest, A Strand (1056) sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 01/21/2022 First Place
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Alex Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 10:50 PM
"No storm will ever topple me from my firm foundation, no ax will find me" - Great optimism. Congratulations!
La France Avatar
January 22, 2022 at 6:57 AM
Christuraj, thanks so much for the compliment and the congratulations ~
Dietrich Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 11:15 AM
wow, I had never seen this one before. It's absolutely gorgeous how it reads AND how it's shaped like a tree. a FAVE, and congrats in Brian's contest.
La France Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 2:17 PM
Andrea, thank you for the compliment and the FAV and the congrats ~
Ranaweera  Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 10:01 AM
A beautiful but sturdy tree that heroically stands amidst all the climactic changes. A great shape poem for the contest, Constance!!
La France Avatar
November 27, 2020 at 9:55 AM
Newton, thanks for the compliment and visit to my poem _Constance
Kendrick Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 10:27 PM
Even though this is a concrete work I find that I am lead by the Spirit to dig deeper into the undertones of metaphor or allegory. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara..Reads like a good contender for the contest.
La France Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 4:15 AM
Sara, thanks for your comment, compliment and visit, hope you are right _Constance
Daniel Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 8:33 PM
An awesome poem in a lovely shape, Constance:)
La France Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 4:16 AM
Jo, thank you for visiting with the awesome _Constance
Leffanta Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 10:39 AM
In great shape! Aloha! Rico
La France Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 4:01 PM
Rico, thanks for the compliment _Constance
Blown Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 9:19 AM
...nice write....a treestreetreat.....stan sand
La France Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 4:01 PM
Stan, thank you for the compliment _Constance
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