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floating paper boats in running rain water, early morning school walks with my mates, gran’s story times under bright full moon, family eating meals from same steel plate, proudly wearing new clothes during festival days, chatting with mum near our garden gate, are memories treasured from my younger days!!!! Premium contest winner 49er poetry contest Sponsor Anthony Biaanco 7 words each, 7 lines in all Written 20/10/2020

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Date: 11/3/2020 2:04:00 AM
You think exactly like me. By the way which part of India are you from? I am Tamil born and brought up in delhi presently (after marriage) in Thane Maharashtra. My hindi better than Tamil. Do you know any good site for Hindi poetry.? Looking forward to reading more of your poems. Take care Regards Rama.
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 11/4/2020 10:01:00 PM
I am Iyer too. Maybe that's why I can relate to your poems.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/3/2020 11:20:00 AM
Rama thank you! Happy you like my writing style! I am Tamil too and an Iyer at that! Grew up in Hyderabad and also in the North! Learnt Hindi, Urdu and Telugu!
Date: 11/2/2020 11:12:00 AM
Nicely penned Krish. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/2/2020 11:52:00 AM
Thanks Linda! Happy you like it!:)
Date: 11/2/2020 6:17:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win. Bachpan ke din yaad aa gaye :) Thanks! You simple english and things I can relate and understand. I really enjoy reading your poems. Enjoy your win. Have a great day ahead. Take care. Regards Rama
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/2/2020 8:57:00 AM
Thanks Rama! My attempt is to communicate and influence thought! big colourful words win prizes but lose readers! Dil ki baat, dil ki zubaan, samajne mein assaan! Good to know you speak hindi!
Date: 11/1/2020 11:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement. :-)
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/2/2020 8:49:00 AM
Thanks Joanna! Thanks for the visit and your supportive words! Regards
Date: 10/23/2020 1:46:00 PM
That first line so nostalgic, calling back to a more innocent time, wonderful entry for the contest~
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/23/2020 1:54:00 PM
Michelle Thank you! It is always a pleasure to have you visit my page! Appreciate it! :)
Date: 10/22/2020 9:27:00 AM
A lovely experience and write. God bless you
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/22/2020 9:31:00 AM
Thanks Regina! Happy to hear from you! Best Wishes to you

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