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Tread Softly

Tread softly Tread like the breeze that passes through the fields to sway with the daisies Because you are treading on my dreams Think with your heart because your heart is entwined in mine Your rational mind might be blind to this bond And may lead us away from our joy And hold me tight tonight like an infant that cries As your aura spirt and that heartbeat is all I need to heal September, 09, 2022 Inspiration quotes, "Tread softly because your tread on my dreams" written for a contest

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Michael Kalavik

Date: 1/31/2023 7:02:00 PM

Nice internal rhyme. Scans easily, like you're not over doing it.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/31/2023 11:36:00 AM

A creative write. Love your line, "because your heart is entwined in mine." Beautiful...... Have a blessed/great day...................

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/24/2022 9:53:00 AM

What a clever poem my friend and with what passion you have woven this little gem together. Kudos. i am slowly getting better and that is thank-you to my husband, all my family, our nurses and doctors and all my dear friends on Poetry soup, you being one of them dear Pagunda Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Weston Gregory

Date: 10/17/2022 9:19:00 PM

A timely piece that speak well of expressing the things that though emotional can be protected in more ways than one.

Bill Baker

Date: 10/11/2022 4:36:00 PM

A heartfelt and mindful poem, Paghunda. I like the tenderness and openness of your words. Good poetry, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Joe Maverick

Date: 9/27/2022 3:16:00 PM

Powerful in its message, plaintiff in its cry' Softly breaking in message, As cloudscapes do; festooning skies.'

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/9/2022 7:37:00 PM

wow, this is so tender, Paghunda. May this person tread softly for you!!

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/9/2022 5:25:00 PM

Dear Paghunda, heartfelt beauty spills with a tender caress of your pen upon the page. A stunning poem, my inspiring friend. I especially loved; “Tread like the breeze that passes through the fields to sway with the daisies” - this imagery just sweeps me up and away! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Joseph May

Date: 9/8/2022 1:33:00 PM

Beautiful write where the heart speaks of joy