Trapped

Trapped My brain Will not stop Clickety-clack On a hellbent track Trapped

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L Milton Hankins

Date: 5/8/2022 9:22:00 AM

Oh my, I know this feeling so well!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/8/2022 6:56:00 PM

Hope you've sprung the trap by now, Milt. Peace, Gershon

Deb M

Date: 5/8/2022 8:50:00 AM

Love this Mr Wolf…..usually happens when you’re supposed to be sleeping! Debx

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/8/2022 6:53:00 PM

Ha, ha. Remember that I am 'Wolf as in Fox' - always sleep with one eye open. Thanks, Deb

Jeff Kyser

Date: 5/8/2022 4:32:00 AM

We’re supposed to take every thought captive, but sometimes it is the other way around, it seems!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/8/2022 6:50:00 PM

Methinks you are correct, Jeff. :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/8/2022 2:27:00 AM

Shame we can't pull the emergency chain when that happens. Tom

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/8/2022 6:44:00 PM

Tom, are you pulling my chain, perhaps? lol. Thanks, gw

Terry Miller

Date: 5/8/2022 12:45:00 AM

Yep, I know that feeling, great write!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/8/2022 6:21:00 PM

Hope you've sprung that trap by now! Thanks, Gershon

Anna Marie Kaianah

Date: 5/7/2022 8:40:00 PM

Great write Gershon! ~Anna Kaianah

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/7/2022 8:49:00 PM

Thank you so much, Anna. Especially nice to receive a comment on a poem like this one... that's not for everyone, as they say. Appreciated! Light and Illumination, Gershon