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As the peacock-sage waves of whimsical peace faded in silence's pale watercolors, I masked my eerie eyelashes, with drifting angel-mist smog. For, I sensed the wistful wailings of ambrosial lilies, encased in my heart's crystal casket, as wistful wildfire of hatred incinerated my wildflower-wonderings and life's trepidations exiled this bohemian buttercup in time's abstract moors. I've forever wondered, if sugarplum snow upon these luscious lies will ever hum the harmonized secrets of a soulful swan within me, who yearns to transcend in these tamarind tunes of liberty - within a pearly birdsong. Since many sienna centuries, carmine tears of beasty roses have been aching to carve an escape from the candlelit cracks of this Ice Queen's heart. Waltzing through woeful destiny's sinful deceit, the enchanted witch blanketed within my wine nightmares, seeks to surrender towards a tender transmutation and cleanse every harlequin heartbeat of my tinseled copper-soul with a heavenly touch of gold. For, am I nothing but a citrine cacophony of a crestfallen hummingbird, who sheds her last fluffy feather as the moon hints a melancholic hymn at midnight? Can I ever be more than just a bleeding silhouette of sin? Perhaps, my alchemical magenta muse has orchestrated a mahogany soliloquy upon those sentimental stars and revealed those pristine turquoise truths - that twilight conceals. The eclipsed glow of victimised sun too aches for a miraculous metamorphosis, that could paint every bougainvillea's burn with empathetic elegies. So, tomorrow, when I wake up, with ego shorn and dignity stirred with blasphemous scarlets, boundaries blurred as lethal logic blends with naive allure of love, I don't desire to dream of letting my skin melt in eucalyptus embers. Instead, I hope to embrace this jeweled journey ~ of dark and dreams, of agony and allure, of melancholy and magick, of remorse and rendezvous, of hoax and hearts, of death and life; ~ where each forlorn feeling dazzles like a breathing moonflower of 'Joie De Vivre'... Perhaps, when those aesthetic estuaries flowing in pastel phrases from the honeydew abode, shall streak glitters of wisdom across the palette of my dawning lifeline, I will swirl in meaningful tapestries of metaphors, stained with pigments of those divine hues - which define my seraphic soul.

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Date: 12/22/2023 7:17:00 PM
Hiya There are more words said here than in my entire vocabulary. So colorful in their imagery. Thank you
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Date: 12/18/2023 9:11:00 AM
Absolutely gorgeous Hiya. Your literary skills shine through this beauty. :) PS: I see congratulations are in order, as well!
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Date: 12/18/2023 12:27:00 AM
Hiya, you are splurging in the plethora of soul stirring metaphors! I am in awe of your stunning versification. Dear talented friend, I am so happy for your well deserved trophy win and hearty Congratulations!
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Date: 12/17/2023 11:50:00 PM
Oh Hiya. A wonderful exposition rich with analogies steep deep in symbolism, whereto I attribute to many of your writings. Let me know when you go to publish, my friend. Aloha, William
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Date: 12/16/2023 1:05:00 PM
This was created with such a personal touch and honesty that held your readers in.:) A deep pleasure!
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Date: 12/16/2023 10:37:00 AM
I agree with Tom here. You brim with metaphors! Lovely images.
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Date: 12/16/2023 6:06:00 AM
"I will swirl in meaningful tapestries of metaphors." I would say this is the perfect line to describe your style of writing. Have a great weekend Hiya
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Date: 12/15/2023 6:39:00 PM
I love the quotes: a soulful swan within me, For, am I nothing but a citrine cacophony of a crestfallen hummingbird. So much imagery and feelings in your words. Your poems verse flows like a gentle stream. Just stunning. Enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem. May you have a Merry Christmas & a Happy New Year. Hugs my friend.
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Date: 12/15/2023 5:47:00 PM
So beautifully written! Every line was pure pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing this jewel. :)
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Date: 12/15/2023 7:10:00 AM
Sesquipedalian wording explodes within your lines. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 12/15/2023 6:00:00 AM
A masterful piece. A pleasure to read from start to finish.
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Date: 12/15/2023 5:36:00 AM
So incredible is your versification. I am swept away in the torrential flow of your metaphors. Your word power is just colossal. "seeks to surrender towards a tender transmutation and cleanse every harlequin heartbeat of my tinseled copper-soul with a heavenly touch of gold. " Here I discern your earnest desire for a transmutation. You are no base metal, dear Hiya, you have the glitter of gold. I fall short of words to praise your poetic prowess while you attribute sweet music to the jarring notes of a broken guitar.
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Date: 12/14/2023 5:44:00 PM
What an incredible work of pure beauty in your poem Hiya, what a beautiful and artistic pen you wield! This is sheer art, so gorgeous!
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Date: 12/14/2023 3:42:00 PM
you've captured transformation so beautifully, Hiya! Your words were like paint on a paint brush painting an elegant, bejeweled journey of of dark and dreams, of agony and allure, of melancholy and magick, of remorse and rendezvous, of hoax and hearts, of death and life. Just wow! Every word and verse are so dense with meaning. I'm in awe! Best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara
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Date: 12/14/2023 11:01:00 AM
So, tomorrow, when I wake up, with ego shorn and dignity stirred---I hope to embrace this jeweled journey ~ of dark and dreams---I felt the turn in your poem dwelling in transformation to a more meaningful world. Splendid take on the contest theme, Hiya.
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Date: 12/14/2023 10:24:00 AM
You used the prompt very well describing a change in how you feel and outlook in life.. a lot of metaphors and descriptive words in your poem and nice alliteration... we all want to have a seraphic soul, but sometimes we have to go through a challenge or struggle to learn and grow from adversity.... Great poem Hiya
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Date: 12/14/2023 9:25:00 AM
Your poem is a mesmerizing opus of language, a testament to your profound talent for capturing the essence of transformation and the mystical power of the alchemical muse. With elegant strokes of literary brilliance, you have woven a tapestry of colors, summoning a symphony of magenta hues that dance upon the canvas of our imagination. Your words have unveiled the hidden depths of celestial sentiment, illuminating pristine truths that shimmer like the purest turquoise.
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Date: 12/14/2023 9:26:00 AM
I found myself utterly enthralled by the sheer poetic beauty of these lines, their unparalleled uniqueness, and their artistic finesse. And, may I add, the conclusion you have crafted is truly remarkable, leaving an indelible impression upon the reader's soul.
Date: 12/14/2023 9:18:00 AM
Nice poem from our illustrious poet. I would have liked it even in shorter version.
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Date: 12/14/2023 6:44:00 AM
Wow your wordplay here is beyond profound and magical! And so deeply moving; not sure where to begin praising this poem but let me start with the stanza where you’ve used alliterations in such a gorgeous manner especially “ jeweled journey ~ of dark and dreams, of agony and allure, of melancholy and magick, of remorse and rendezvous, of hoax and hearts,” left me in awe! Captivated by the poetic beauty of those lines so unique and so artistic: and i love the ending too how you’ve written -
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Date: 12/14/2023 6:45:00 AM
“~ where each forlorn feeling dazzles like a breathing moonflower of 'Joie De Vivre'... “ just love that! Brilliant diction and creative really! Absolute pleasure reading this. Best wishes for the contest. Definitely a fave

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