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Translucent Cascade

Translucent waters Bring life, in cascading flow down natures highways

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/8/2010 6:54:00 PM
Superb. Wonderfully descriptio of nature at its best. Mac
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Date: 3/4/2010 1:46:00 PM
Good one, Congrats on your HM, James! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 3/4/2010 9:56:00 AM
Nice win James, congratulations, Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/3/2010 9:45:00 PM
So very nice Haiku! James! Congrats on your win! Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 3/3/2010 7:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 3/3/2010 5:17:00 PM
Congratulations to you James on your placement with this fine poem of yours!
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Date: 3/3/2010 12:27:00 PM
Congratulations to you, James for this wonderul win in the contest!! Enjoy your win. Peace, Audrey
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Date: 3/3/2010 12:21:00 PM
Congrats. on your success James. Good stuff Déirdre
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Date: 3/3/2010 12:13:00 PM
James, Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest with this lovely haiku. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 3/3/2010 8:56:00 AM
lBeautifullly worded. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/3/2010 5:40:00 AM
Congrats James on your winning poem in Raul's contest ... a beautiful Haiku and a wonderful win for u to enjoy...luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/3/2010 3:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Icy Cascade James. Love,Carol
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Date: 3/3/2010 1:42:00 AM
James, congratulations on your placement in my contest...Raul
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Date: 2/25/2010 1:30:00 PM
I love waterfalls can just picture it now, brings back memories of summer in the Lakes...Good luck... Allie
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Date: 2/25/2010 9:19:00 AM
What a wonderful way to spend this snowy day reading poetry. I am so happy that yours was amongst the ones I am reading today. Thank you for sharing your Haiku poetry today James. I wish you the best in Raul's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/24/2010 9:00:00 PM
I love it, James. Perfect Haiku! Should be a winner. Good luck in the contest. I don't do very well with Raul's contests. So I'm staying off his contests. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 2/24/2010 3:21:00 PM
A wonderful Haiku ..if your entry for the contest.. good luck.. my entry is Liquidity.. Raul's contests have become exciting each time more and more.. a perfect description..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/24/2010 3:01:00 PM
Beautiful poem, love Simone
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Date: 2/24/2010 2:44:00 PM
Uplifting poem. Thanks for sharing this day brightener. Good luck in the contest. Karen
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Date: 2/24/2010 1:51:00 PM
Rivers and smaller streams well described in this one. That is the way of the Spirit for it brings Life. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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Date: 2/24/2010 1:22:00 PM
My favorite Highways Mr. Fraser, beautiful Haiku ! james
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