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Tracks In the Sand

Hearing once more the lion's roar in my mind, feeling the lion once more creep up from behind, my heart palpitating out of rhythmic time, with sweat beading down my forehead, chest and sides, Breaking into a run knowing the lion had an evil plan, I inadvertently stepped into a bog of swallowing quicksand, sinking down deeper and deeper in dispair, feeling frozen in time like I was going nowhere, Fully overwhelmed with the quicksand up to my chin, before going completely under I saw the lion grin, I prayed, please Lord help me get through this anxiety, with that He pulled me out and once again comforted me. 11-9-16

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Date: 11/13/2016 11:52:00 AM
Well done, Cheryl! Congratulations! ...Fran
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 11/13/2016 8:46:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comment Fran!:)
Date: 11/12/2016 9:05:00 PM
Nightmarish but with a hopeful ending! Congrats, Cheryl!
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 11/12/2016 11:31:00 PM
Thanks so much for your encouraging comment Kim!:)
Date: 11/12/2016 12:11:00 PM
Congratulations Cheryl! I am so proud of you. You have accomplished a lot. I look forward to seeing even more blessings come to you in the future. - Hans
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 11/12/2016 5:56:00 PM
Thanks so much Hans for your very kind comment! Blessings to you too!:)
Date: 11/10/2016 3:35:00 PM
Fascinating poem, Cheryl. A thriller and a great ending. Good story telling. Love and joy to you.
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 11/10/2016 7:20:00 PM
Thanks so much Freddie, for your very kind comment and visit! P & L~Che
Date: 11/9/2016 10:11:00 PM
Very good Cheryl! I love it. I do hope though, you can turn the Lion into a good courageous one :). I like Lions and view them in that way. God Bless
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 11/10/2016 8:28:00 AM
Yes, I guess they can be both intimidating and courageous lol! Thank you for the very nice comment Heidi!:)

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