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Touch Me - Dusk

Touch Me – Dusk Original Poem written for the contest: “Touch Me Up and Down” ¤¤ Placed 4th ¤¤ Samual Ronthorpe Dawn, hugging, Our Planet. The sun gives life, Squeezing her children, Providing us with food, And regulating our mood. Occasionally, she will rest, And allow Dusk to grip the land, Night. Dawn and Dusk share in natures’ epic dance. This dance of the titans flows flawlessly, Dawn releases her grip at twilight, And allows Dusk to take the lead, Dusk teases the Night, “Join Me”, Night spins Dusk, all alone, Night brushes time by, Looking for Dawn, Holding hands, Letting, go.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/18/2012 8:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Samual. Love, Carol
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Samual Ronthorpe
Date: 7/26/2012 1:14:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment
Date: 2/6/2012 5:31:00 PM
and a VERY belated Congrats is in order I see!!
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Samual Ronthorpe
Date: 2/6/2012 10:04:00 PM
Thanks for your kind comments.
Date: 2/6/2012 5:30:00 PM
wow, it could complement the one you did on sun and moon! I am glad I came way down here to find this one that I never read before. I have several that use personification on dawn, dusk, moon, and sun. I think I told you that already. I love that kind of writing when I see it!!
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Date: 11/23/2011 10:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Samual. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/21/2011 5:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Samual
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Date: 5/1/2011 8:10:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win in Nette's fine contest Samual. Have a lovely Sunday....:)
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Date: 4/29/2011 11:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Samual in Nette's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/28/2011 9:24:00 PM
This is a well deserved win, congrats on this beautiful poem
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Date: 4/28/2011 6:42:00 PM
I cant remember reading any of your work before..but Isure like this one. Dawn and Dusk in a dance..great image. Bg
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Date: 4/28/2011 11:14:00 AM
Many congrats Samual on your well deserved win .enjoyed your beautiful poem--kash
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Date: 4/28/2011 11:10:00 AM
Awesome write ...Congrats Samual on your well deserved winning place. gautami
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Date: 4/28/2011 9:46:00 AM
Wow! Definitely one of the best I've seen for this contest, Samual. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/28/2011 4:44:00 AM
Congrats Samual on your super win in Nette's contest with this lovely delight and entry.. enjoy your top ten sweet success with luv..
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Date: 4/28/2011 2:26:00 AM
I sure enjoyed the personification you have here of Dusk and Dawn, Samual! I like that thought of Dawn "hugging" the planet :) Super congrats on your win :D
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Date: 4/27/2011 6:48:00 PM
Congratulation Samual on your success in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses
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