Touch Me-Dusk

Dusk wraps its gentle arms around my soul and its shadows hide the sorrows of the day. I find a certain respite from all the needs of daily life and can drift once more in peaceful rest, its soft touch reassuring and hopeful... Eyes bathed by the faintest of morning light peaking through the windows of my mind. It warms the corners of today with the promise of new life. A morning lark begins to sing her glad song, greeting day and bringing forth joyful Dawn...
Barbara Gorelick.. for the "Touch Me " contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 5/1/2011 8:12:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win in Nette's fine contest Barbara. Have a lovely Sunday....:)
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Date: 4/29/2011 12:00:00 PM
Congratulations Barbara on your win in Nette's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/29/2011 5:27:00 AM
My Most Beloved, Barbara, I see a Winner so Very Beautiful, Congratulations I read YOUR Comment To Paula on her Contest Entree to my Contest YOU Know me so Well LOVE YOU ALWAYS, and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG
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Date: 4/28/2011 11:22:00 AM
From dusk to dawn---wonderful!Congrats Barbara on your well deserved win---kash
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Date: 4/28/2011 11:16:00 AM
Awesome write ...Congrats Barbara on your well deserved winning place.luv gautami
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Date: 4/28/2011 9:53:00 AM
So happy to see your poem in the winners' circle, dear LNC. This one really "touched me." Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/28/2011 9:50:00 AM
love this one, congrats on your win Barbara
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Date: 4/28/2011 7:36:00 AM
Many congrats, Barbara : )
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Date: 4/28/2011 5:53:00 AM
A morning lark begins, such a lovely image. Many warm congrats for this win.
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Date: 4/28/2011 4:51:00 AM
Congrats BG on your wonderful win in Nette's contest with this lovely delight and exquisite entry luv.. enjoy another top spot for a top notch entry ..
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Date: 4/28/2011 3:11:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Barbara :) Really enjoyed your beautiful write and of how you did yours from "dusk to dawn" -- way to go :)
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Date: 4/27/2011 7:58:00 PM
Very nice.
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Date: 4/27/2011 6:52:00 PM
Congratulation Barbara on your success in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/26/2011 4:21:00 PM
I love the use of personifacation with dusk wrapping arms around you to soothe you after a trying day. You definitely "touched me" with this poem, dear LNC. Best wishes in Nette's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/23/2011 11:59:00 PM
Barbara, this sure deserves a win. One of your best, my dear! And you followed the topic exactly, keeping it about "touch" !
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Date: 4/23/2011 11:15:00 PM
mmmm-mmmm good.
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