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Tornado

Torrential rain, blinding wind howling, Dark heavy clouds ominously scowling, Brilliant radiant light of electric flashes, Following the lightning, defiant crashes, Loudest blasts make brave men cower, Thunder so deafening it exudes power, I was born of a powerful thunderstorm. Still attached to its base, I will spawn. Nature’s most violent, I am called TORNADO, 300 miles per hour, my winds will blow. A rotating column of air touching the ground, Violently spinning with a horrendous sound. I will cause fatalities at a devastating rate, Buildings, and whole towns, I will annihilate, People panic seeing my deadly approach, Over fields and farms and cities I encroach. Lifting up animals, houses and cars in my wake, My tempest is unending, with fury, victims I take, Finally cold down drafts signal my final gust. I slowly cease rotating and turn to dust.
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September 2, 2023 at 10:03 AM
Back with hearty congratulations on your amply-deserved win with this great personification poem, SV.
Volumes Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 2:06 PM
Thank you dear friend
May Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 6:42 AM
Leaving devastation in its wake, Congrats on your win, Very nicely done
Volumes Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 2:06 PM
Thank you Joseph. I appreciate being awarded a place in your contest.
George Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 9:44 PM
Great personification ! With Tornado, Nature's fury is unleashed. Wreaking havoc, it moves on. Its torrential devastaing strength is powerfully delienated. How cleverly you have summed up its gradual death ! This goes into my FAVE. All the best dear friend !
Volumes Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 10:14 PM
Oh Valsa thank you so much. Your lovely comment is so very much appreciated. Cheers my friend.
Poet Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 12:21 PM
Dear, SV, your personification and descriptive writing in this poem are outstanding. You deftly weave the character's rage into the threads of the story. And you have used rhyme, playfulness, and great profundity to submit a contest entry that is simply flawless. Your writing is really vivid because due to your careful attention to detail and the compelling nature of the poem. BOL in the contest
Volumes Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 5:45 PM
One day if I live to be 150, my ability to post descriptive passages using a heightened, immensely broad vocabulary such as yours, Las. THEN I will call myself a poet. Right now I am content to be a person that writes poems. Thank you for your wonderful comment, and for keeping the bar so high it encourages me to keep improving. SV
Andresen Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 10:34 AM
- An awesome personification, S.V. ... but not at all the way I think about your personality :) ... "My tempest is unending, with fury, victims I take ... I was born of a powerful thunderstorm" ... powerful forces in your words :) - hugs
Volumes Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 5:34 PM
Beautiful friend, you made me laugh ! I would like to say that's the nicest thing anyone ever said to me, but you know I would be joking. You made my day, Anne-Lise. Thank you for your lovely compliment. SV (Super Violent ????) LOL
DiMino Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 9:59 AM
Outstanding storm! You get a FAV from me.
Volumes Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 10:30 AM
Wow Joe, thank you so much. Best wishes from SV
Sharma  Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 2:09 AM
Oh wow, the personification is brilliantly done in this piece.. Describing the characteristics whilst blending with wrath and emotions, such an impeccable take for the contest.. The rhymes, wordplay, depth.. Everything is so meticulous and intriguing, along with being evocative..
Volumes Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 3:13 AM
Hiya thank you for your generous comment of my poem. Its really appreciated,
Buhagiar Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 12:46 AM
Great personification with splendid descriptions.
Volumes Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 3:11 AM
Thank you , very nice of you to comment.
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