Torn Hearts - Not Really Limerick Magic

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Two hearts follow the eyes
Two persons, personalities collide
Too much joy in bedroom
If marriage can't come soon
Casual love, short-term, volcano pride
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George Avatar
May 5, 2022 at 6:47 PM
I believe that marriage is a sacred union ! Its sanctity has to be preserved at all costs !
Deo Avatar
May 6, 2022 at 1:08 AM
Amen and Amen! ThanX Sis
Baker Avatar
May 5, 2022 at 4:09 PM
Be careful, lots of rocks in the road! Bill
Deo Avatar
May 5, 2022 at 5:41 PM
We all had those "temptations," but we the SAVED try to honor Jesus blood sacrifice. But all around us, folk say ... Enjoy your sin nothing will happen!
Buhagiar Avatar
May 5, 2022 at 7:37 AM
Living outside of marriage can be fatal.
Deo Avatar
May 5, 2022 at 9:32 AM
Absolutely true. But victor. When bad things don't happen, couples say, "SEE NOTHING'S WRONG." Just as Adam & Eve didn't die immediately after sinning ... We still fight their demons & lying spirits today
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