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Torn Hearts - Not Really Limerick Magic

I Two hearts follow the eyes Two persons, personalities collide Too much joy in bedroom If marriage can't come soon Casual love, short-term, volcano pride

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Date: 5/5/2022 6:47:00 PM
I believe that marriage is a sacred union ! Its sanctity has to be preserved at all costs !
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Anil Deo
Date: 5/6/2022 1:08:00 AM
Amen and Amen! ThanX Sis
Date: 5/5/2022 4:09:00 PM
Be careful, lots of rocks in the road! Bill
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Anil Deo
Date: 5/5/2022 5:41:00 PM
We all had those "temptations," but we the SAVED try to honor Jesus blood sacrifice. But all around us, folk say ... Enjoy your sin nothing will happen!
Date: 5/5/2022 7:37:00 AM
Living outside of marriage can be fatal.
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Anil Deo
Date: 5/5/2022 9:32:00 AM
Absolutely true. But victor. When bad things don't happen, couples say, "SEE NOTHING'S WRONG." Just as Adam & Eve didn't die immediately after sinning ... We still fight their demons & lying spirits today

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