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My dream is taking me back- back to my old home, the room that was mine is now faded in time; torn curtains are blowing in the wind while I roam. In the open window- I hesitate then climb, I stand silent in the stillness with reflection; the room that was mine is now faded in time. Such sweet memories I hold to my heart with affection, I can hear the laughter of grandma and mother; I stand silent in the stillness with reflection. Once that floor was shiny where I played with brother, all my dollies used to wait on my bed for me; I can hear the laughter of grandma and mother. Beyond those tattered curtains flowers I would see, I think those days in this home were my very best; all my dollies used to wait on my bed for me. I feel sleepy- so lay down in my old nest, my dream is taking me back- back to my old home; I think my days in this home were my very best, torn curtains are blowing in the wind while I roam. ___________________________ August 25, 2017 (Edit 09/26/18) Poetry/Terzanelle/Torn Curtains Copyright Protected, ID 17-1065-001-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Date: 9/29/2018 10:48:00 AM
Well written and nice touching tone with lovely imagery.
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Date: 9/26/2018 10:17:00 AM
Such a beautifully expressed memory in your excellent Terzanelle. I really enjoyed reading as I felt the breeze xxoo
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