Tonight I Went To Heaven

Tonight I went to Heaven

Tonight, I went to heaven even though I was asleep.
Alone stood I in a clouded hall, confused and at the brink.
Starkness attacked my presence; bewildered I began to weep.
In the distance, I saw figures and my eyes started to blink.

Slowly white approached me…light was their backdrop.
Awe-stricken by the quiet, my eternity seemed so near.
I could not feel my heartbeat throb; soon, breath, too, began to stop.
My swirling head spun very fast, images appeared unclear.

With open arms they greeted me my loved friends and relatives dear.
Peace and light surrounded everywhere as starkness disappeared.
“Come, my dear, do not shed your tears. Our Father is very near.”
I walked with them beyond that light; my trust had been commandeered.

I did not see the pearly gates, but the streets were burnished gold.
Winding paths where chariots passed on golden bricks placed with care.
There tapestries spun from angel hair, I spellbound did behold.
Glistened by the Father’s glow that radiated loves bright flare.

I expected the grandest mansions, exquisite, very plush.
But saw small dwellings of much style each one prepared...in place.
People walked upon the streets, but not one soul did I see rush.
Simple, like the Savior, unfettered-love filled Heaven's space.

Soft music permeated, heavenly singing infusing.
I wondered why they took me from the hall to that lovely hill -
Dressed in perfect whiteness they came with pureness embracing.
And led me to my amazing and beautiful dreamy thrill.

© July 17, 2010
Dane Smith-Johnsen


© July 17, 2010
Dane Smith-Johnsen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 7/19/2010 11:32:00 AM
Congratulations Dane Ann on your well deserved win in Catie Lindsey's contest "Fast and Fabulous". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/18/2010 8:16:00 PM
Very well described , Dane Ann, reminded me of that woman's writing from Embraced by the Light! Congratulations!!!!
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Date: 7/18/2010 9:45:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win in Catie's fine contest Dane Ann with this wonderful poetry >> James
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Date: 7/18/2010 9:19:00 AM
Congrats on your success in the contest. This is "heavenly" BG
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Date: 7/17/2010 4:42:00 PM
Lovely Quatrain Dane Ann and beautifully inspiring.. in every line is a special memento of emotion and love.. enjoyed the last line so much.. thankxxx for another exciting contest.. am continuing my engagement celebration this evening ... thankxxx for being a wonderful friend.. with luv..
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