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Tongues Tied

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                   Stars shine so bright
             this moonlit  night
              and in my  arms
               you lie  within 
                this kiss   I 
                 leave my
                  love for
                   ever
                    by

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Casarah Nance Date: 12/26/2016 6:09:00 PM aww.. that cool Login to Reply

John Hamilton Date: 10/20/2016 8:31:00 AM Very artistic, and creative, this is a real beauty of a write, takes a lot of time so thanks for this posting, just great! Login to Reply

Maurice Yvonne Date: 10/17/2016 8:10:00 PM Love this concrete style. Four for four. A Fav! Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 10/16/2016 7:16:00 PM SO creative Tim an excellent musing:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Jean Murray Date: 10/16/2016 10:58:00 AM You naughty boy, French kissing. Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 10/16/2016 11:14:00 AM Funny Jean...lol

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 10/15/2016 6:22:00 PM What an experiment it is dear, Tim! Keep it up! Wonderful! Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 10/16/2016 11:13:00 AM Thank you my friend

Eileen Manassian Date: 10/15/2016 4:44:00 PM OH!!!! This is simply fabulous...what you did with the tongues tied entwined bit is genius. :) Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 10/15/2016 6:09:00 PM Thanks Eileen. Happy you liked it.

Arthur Vaso Date: 10/15/2016 4:20:00 PM Very creative! Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 10/15/2016 6:08:00 PM Thanks Art

Joe Dimino Date: 10/15/2016 8:22:00 AM Excellent!! Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 10/15/2016 6:07:00 PM Thanks Joe

Nette Onclaud Date: 10/15/2016 6:04:00 AM love the shape; love the verse, tim.. huggs Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 10/15/2016 6:07:00 PM Thanks nette

Alexis Y. Date: 10/14/2016 8:39:00 PM Hi Tim, Now that's what I call very creative. I really enjoyed how you crafted this poem. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 10/15/2016 6:06:00 PM Thanks so much

Constance La France Date: 10/14/2016 7:51:00 PM Tim, oh how creative , I like this alot Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 10/15/2016 6:05:00 PM Thank you Constance

Carol B. Date: 10/14/2016 6:39:00 PM Very creative! Loved the poem :) Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 10/14/2016 6:46:00 PM Thanks a bunch Carol

Heidi Sands Date: 10/14/2016 6:27:00 PM Neat! :) Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 10/14/2016 6:45:00 PM Thanks Heidi

Mike Hauser Date: 10/14/2016 5:57:00 PM Love it! Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 10/14/2016 5:58:00 PM Thanks Mike

Chris Green Date: 10/14/2016 4:46:00 PM Really nice, a beautiful little rhyme and a cool formatted opening. Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 10/14/2016 4:52:00 PM Thanks Chris...I'm posting a lot today. My muse is out of control...lol