Tim Smith Poet Concrete

Tongues Tied

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      N                      E
        G                 I
           U      N   T  W
               E    S           I
            R                      N
           E                        E
          V                        D
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                   Stars shine so bright
             this moonlit  night
              and in my  arms
               you lie  within 
                this kiss   I 
                 leave my
                  love for
                   ever
                    by

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Casarah Nance December 26, 2016 at 6:09 PM aww.. that cool

John Hamilton October 20, 2016 at 8:31 AM Very artistic, and creative, this is a real beauty of a write, takes a lot of time so thanks for this posting, just great!

Maurice Yvonne October 17, 2016 at 8:10 PM Love this concrete style. Four for four. A Fav!

Jan Allison October 16, 2016 at 7:16 PM SO creative Tim an excellent musing:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray October 16, 2016 at 10:58 AM You naughty boy, French kissing. Tim Smith October 16, 2016 at 11:14 AM Funny Jean...lol

Demetrios Trifiatis October 15, 2016 at 6:22 PM What an experiment it is dear, Tim! Keep it up! Wonderful! Tim Smith October 16, 2016 at 11:13 AM Thank you my friend

Eileen Manassian October 15, 2016 at 4:44 PM OH!!!! This is simply fabulous...what you did with the tongues tied entwined bit is genius. :) Tim Smith October 15, 2016 at 6:09 PM Thanks Eileen. Happy you liked it.

Arthur Vaso October 15, 2016 at 4:20 PM Very creative! Tim Smith October 15, 2016 at 6:08 PM Thanks Art

Joseph P. DiMino October 15, 2016 at 8:22 AM Excellent!! Tim Smith October 15, 2016 at 6:07 PM Thanks Joe

Nette Onclaud October 15, 2016 at 6:04 AM love the shape; love the verse, tim.. huggs Tim Smith October 15, 2016 at 6:07 PM Thanks nette

Alexis Y. October 14, 2016 at 8:39 PM Hi Tim, Now that's what I call very creative. I really enjoyed how you crafted this poem. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis Tim Smith October 15, 2016 at 6:06 PM Thanks so much

Constance La France October 14, 2016 at 7:51 PM Tim, oh how creative , I like this alot Tim Smith October 15, 2016 at 6:05 PM Thank you Constance

Carol B. October 14, 2016 at 6:39 PM Very creative! Loved the poem :) Tim Smith October 14, 2016 at 6:46 PM Thanks a bunch Carol

Heidi Sands October 14, 2016 at 6:27 PM Neat! :) Tim Smith October 14, 2016 at 6:45 PM Thanks Heidi

Mike Hauser October 14, 2016 at 5:57 PM Love it! Tim Smith October 14, 2016 at 5:58 PM Thanks Mike

Chris Green October 14, 2016 at 4:46 PM Really nice, a beautiful little rhyme and a cool formatted opening. Tim Smith October 14, 2016 at 4:52 PM Thanks Chris...I'm posting a lot today. My muse is out of control...lol