Tongues Tied

T O D N E G I U N T W E S I R N E E V D E R O F Stars shine so bright this moonlit night and in my arms you lie within this kiss I leave my love for ever by

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Casarah Nance

Date: 12/26/2016 6:09:00 PM

aww.. that cool

John Hamilton

Date: 10/20/2016 8:31:00 AM

Very artistic, and creative, this is a real beauty of a write, takes a lot of time so thanks for this posting, just great!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/17/2016 8:10:00 PM

Love this concrete style. Four for four. A Fav!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/16/2016 7:16:00 PM

SO creative Tim an excellent musing:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray

Date: 10/16/2016 10:58:00 AM

You naughty boy, French kissing.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/16/2016 11:14:00 AM

Funny Jean...lol

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/15/2016 6:22:00 PM

What an experiment it is dear, Tim! Keep it up! Wonderful!

Tim Smith
Date: 10/16/2016 11:13:00 AM

Thank you my friend

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/15/2016 4:44:00 PM

OH!!!! This is simply fabulous...what you did with the tongues tied entwined bit is genius. :)

Tim Smith
Date: 10/15/2016 6:09:00 PM

Thanks Eileen. Happy you liked it.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/15/2016 4:20:00 PM

Very creative!

Tim Smith
Date: 10/15/2016 6:08:00 PM

Thanks Art

Joe Dimino

Date: 10/15/2016 8:22:00 AM

Excellent!!

Tim Smith
Date: 10/15/2016 6:07:00 PM

Thanks Joe

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/15/2016 6:04:00 AM

love the shape; love the verse, tim.. huggs

Tim Smith
Date: 10/15/2016 6:07:00 PM

Thanks nette

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/14/2016 8:39:00 PM

Hi Tim, Now that's what I call very creative. I really enjoyed how you crafted this poem. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis

Tim Smith
Date: 10/15/2016 6:06:00 PM

Thanks so much

Constance La France

Date: 10/14/2016 7:51:00 PM

Tim, oh how creative , I like this alot

Tim Smith
Date: 10/15/2016 6:05:00 PM

Thank you Constance

Carol B.

Date: 10/14/2016 6:39:00 PM

Very creative! Loved the poem :)

Tim Smith
Date: 10/14/2016 6:46:00 PM

Thanks a bunch Carol

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/14/2016 6:27:00 PM

Neat! :)

Tim Smith
Date: 10/14/2016 6:45:00 PM

Thanks Heidi

Mike Hauser

Date: 10/14/2016 5:57:00 PM

Love it!

Tim Smith
Date: 10/14/2016 5:58:00 PM

Thanks Mike

Chris Green

Date: 10/14/2016 4:46:00 PM

Really nice, a beautiful little rhyme and a cool formatted opening.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/14/2016 4:52:00 PM

Thanks Chris...I'm posting a lot today. My muse is out of control...lol