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Tomorrow's Tide

On a windswept beach I sit in solitude, Watching the sun sink into tomorrow. Brilliant streaks of pink, shot with gray change with each breath, beauty so intense my heart aches with longing. wanting it to last for eternity. At my feet the tide washes in and out, repeating the ancient pattern that binds us to the past..this is not new.. it seems a message written in the sand to be read and erased from memory.. I can not erase your memory my love..it will be here with tomorrow's tide.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/30/2011 12:43:00 PM
Now why did you make me cry, dear LNC? The thought of the memories of love rolling in and out with the tide is so heartbreaking. Hope you entered this in Rick's pink sky contest because it is one of your best poems ever. Goes to my favorites. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/29/2011 5:05:00 AM
This work is indeed a 7+!! It is beautiful in its sadness. Your second line here is awesome. Thanks for your comment on my recent work. God bless you. Jancarl
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