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Together Alone

One Autumn night We sat by the river His lips touched mine Sending me a shiver His hand took my own And I felt it quiver Finally, together alone. One Autumn Night (in just 7 lines) - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Poet Destroyer A

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/29/2014 12:16:00 AM

big congrats, I STILL love this one.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/27/2014 1:11:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Regina:-) Hugs Jan xx

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 12/27/2014 12:07:00 PM

congratulations regina on your win for a fine write

Edward Ebbs

Date: 12/27/2014 11:09:00 AM

Romantic...from experience? LOL, I know, you won't tell. Congrats!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/27/2014 10:06:00 AM

REGINA, it's an honor having your poem on my winning list. Congratulations on your win in my Autumn Night's contest. A blessing it is to be back. I love nothing more than a free feeling of falling leaves drifting away at night. Thank you for the supporting one of my many soup contest. Stop by my latest blog "Together Alone" if you'd like. No problem if you don't have time. Just take this time and enjoy your win... LOVE LINDA

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/10/2014 9:17:00 AM

It is wonderful being alone with that one special person. Lovely piece.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/8/2014 8:17:00 PM

I love it. Autumn at its best.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/8/2014 4:04:00 PM

Ohhh Gina...this surely should be on the winners' list! It is my type of romantic poetry. Lovely! Take care. // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/7/2014 1:05:00 PM

- A romantic moments - Beautiful short poem! - Luck in contest, Regina! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/7/2014 12:19:00 PM

oh, now this is the kind of autumn night I LIKE, no, I LOVE IT!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/7/2014 9:31:00 AM

So much in so few lines. Succinctly done, Regina. I did not realize that I had won in your contest when I answered your comment on my poem. Thank you. We are having a barbecue at church today and most of us will be wearing a t shirt with Bryan's name on it. The proceeds of their sale will be going toward Bryan's medical expenses. Maybe I will take my poem/prayer. Love, Joyce

Jan Allison

Date: 9/7/2014 4:01:00 AM

You have painted a beautiful romantic scene Regina - its a 7 from me good luck in the contest:-)

Justin Bordner

Date: 9/7/2014 1:56:00 AM

Thats a beautiful moment of trust blooming into love's touch Regina. Together alone is an enchanting phrase that truly emphasizes the special connection. J.A.B.