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Today -

Moments mingled and merged,

into a messy masterpiece

 

 

Aware -

Pastel thoughts and patience,

were pieced together with prayers

 

 

. . Creating hours of calm . .

 

 

Tomorrow -

Tenderness will tangle around time,

teaching me to appreciate today

 

 

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                       ~ Thoughts from the heart ~

A feeling of contentment, even when moments are messy

                     Caressing the blessings around me

Today



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Today -
Moments mingled and merged, 
into a messy masterpiece


Aware -
Pastel thoughts and patience, 
were pieced together with prayers 


. .  Creating hours of calm  . .


Tomorrow -
Tenderness will tangle around time,
teaching me to appreciate today


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                        ~ Thoughts from the heart ~ 
A feeling of contentment, even when moments are messy 
                      Caressing the blessings around me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 9/17/2025 10:42:00 PM
Brandy, my niece is named Brandy too, but her words aren't as profound. I don't know if I should ride raging rivers in a kayak, or relax all day in a hammock with a good book and a cool beverage. Maybe I'll get around to both. Thanks for the advice.
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Date: 9/14/2025 2:02:00 PM
May peace and prosperity in Gods Bounty be your portion.'
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Date: 9/17/2025 11:25:00 AM
Thank you, Joe. This is my wish for you as well. I appreciate you and your kind words. :) Hugs and blessings, Brandy
Date: 8/19/2024 5:43:00 AM
Dear Brandy, I came across your poem and loved every word you inked. Ohh those prayers can be so beautiful. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 8/20/2024 7:00:00 PM
Daniel, I just want you to know that your kindness doesn't go unnoticed. Thank you so much for sharing your beautiful thoughts upon this little scribble of mine. Many wonderful blessings to you, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 6/30/2024 5:50:00 AM
Oh what a beautiful sensitive thought is your TOMORROW.............'teaching you to appreciate TODAY'' - i always love your tender approach to poetry and your poetic mind is always so vivid and vibrant- your poems and scribbles will forever be read. I hope you are keeping well my friend, blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/30/2024 8:31:00 PM
Dear Jennifer, you always know how to bring a smile to my heart. Thank you for saying my poetry is vibrant, yet tender. It is a sensitive thought, indeed. We should always appreciate ' today. ' I'm doing well, my dear sweet friend. I'm embracing each moment around me. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 6/28/2024 7:13:00 PM
Deep thought...you captured an essence
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Date: 6/28/2024 7:53:00 PM
Thank you, Patti. I'm so thankful for each moment, especially, the blessings of today. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 6/22/2024 9:18:00 AM
Love this, Brandy. Great alliteration
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Date: 6/23/2024 6:02:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. You and your kind words are appreciated. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 6/9/2024 1:34:00 PM
A very sensitive write for today Brandy' Tommorow is an horizon away.. Yesterday was full; enough' yet its memory Is fading away!
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Date: 6/16/2024 5:09:00 PM
Joe, your thoughts are beautiful and poetic, and filled with so much truth. Thank you for being here, for being you. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 6/7/2024 3:07:00 PM
Tenderness will tangle around time. Wow. I love that line!! I accidentally came here again and realized how cool that line is. It's great to see lines so original we can be sure they have not been used by anyone before
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Date: 6/7/2024 7:27:00 PM
Thank you for saying you love this line, Andrea. For me, moments are tender, especially during the evening hours. That's why I chose to place it here within my poem. I appreciate that, because my thoughts are always from the heart.
Date: 6/5/2024 11:17:00 PM
Just beautiful!!! Tenderness will tangle around time, teaching me to appreciate today... How true!!!
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Date: 6/6/2024 7:39:00 PM
Thank you, Supraja. I'm so thankful for the moments of today, that have curled around me. You and your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. :) Brandy
Date: 6/4/2024 10:48:00 PM
Always so beautiful and the way you present the poems so prettily above them in the nice script
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Date: 6/6/2024 7:31:00 PM
You're always so kind, Andrea. Thank you for saying this is beautiful, and my presentation is pretty. Your thoughts bring a smile. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 6/2/2024 11:55:00 AM
It's always a good thing to live in the moment. To appreciate today as we await new tidings tomorrow. We can only have more when we are filled with gratitude. "A feeling of contentment, even when moments are messy Caressing the blessings around me." Cheers, Brandy.
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Date: 6/6/2024 7:24:00 PM
I completely agree, Tonye. Moments of today truly are a gift to be opened and enjoyed. A happy heart is filled with appreciation. Being content with the blessings that surround you, is a wonderful feeling, indeed. Thank you for your kind words. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 6/2/2024 1:27:00 AM
Indeed, this is excellent use of alliteration, Brandy, but apart from that it is the theme that makes us pause, think and meditate. Often we fail to appreciate the good things in life and on the contrary concentrate too much on the negatives. ~ Warm regards & hugs, my friend // paul
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Date: 6/3/2024 8:07:00 PM
Dear Paul, your thoughts always make my heart smile. :) I'm not exempt from messy moments in life, but, I do try to embrace the positive within; as much as I can. Floating in better than drowning. Thank you for your lovely comment, my sweet friend. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 6/1/2024 3:46:00 AM
Tomorrow is another day. How many times do we say that without realising the power of life.
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Date: 6/2/2024 6:26:00 PM
So true, Paul. While living in ' today, ' we're always thinking about tomorrow. I'm so thankful for these tender moments before me. You and your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 5/28/2024 1:12:00 PM
Lovely penning Brandy, such lovely wording that speaks so powerfully with just a few effective words. Blessings and hugs, Gordon
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Date: 5/30/2024 7:59:00 PM
Dear Gordon, your thoughts always bring a smile. So beautiful and uplifting. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. Thank you so much, my sweet friend. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 5/27/2024 4:45:00 AM
I like this one, Brandy. Keep on writing. Sara K
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Date: 5/27/2024 6:19:00 PM
Thank you, Sara. So kind of you to say, and I most certainly will. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 5/24/2024 3:36:00 AM
This is quite a lovely write love the essence of creating hours of calm enjoyed reading your poem many blessings
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Date: 5/22/2024 7:32:00 PM
What a beautiful mess it is!
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Date: 5/22/2024 7:36:00 PM
Oh, my ! Such a wonderful thing to say. Thank you, Edward. :)
Date: 5/20/2024 12:14:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write with a great picture. I wish you would write more... Have A Great Day Writing Away...............
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Date: 5/22/2024 2:19:00 PM
Dear Paula, your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. I completely understand, my sweet friend. I'm sure words will find me soon. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 5/19/2024 5:18:00 PM
Even a masterpiece can be messy, many things, blessings, gifts of today. "A feeling of contentment, even when moments are messy" I love this line especially, I feel it too. Beautiful sentiments and alliteration! xhugsx
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Date: 5/19/2024 6:39:00 PM
Dear Anaya, it's so wonderful that you're able to feel each moment and emotion within. You truly understand this feeling of contentment. Blessings surround you too. Thank you for your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 5/16/2024 8:31:00 PM
You are so adept in alliterative verse, dear Brandy! This is a lovely piece. Life may be messy. Still if we think of the blessings that surround, we have greater reason to stay content. That's the only way to make life happy. "Pastel thoughts and patience, were pieced together with prayers . . Creating hours of calm . ." Patience and prayers together is a wonderful combination.
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Date: 5/19/2024 6:27:00 PM
Dear Valsa, I'm not exactly sure why, but lately, I've been enjoying this journey with alliteration. Your kind words and compliments leave me in complete awe. While embracing the messy moments of life, there's contentment, indeed. When a heart holds happiness, there's peace. Thank you for sharing your favorite thoughts within. I appreciate you, my sweet friend. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 5/16/2024 2:56:00 PM
"Tenderness will tangle around time" Wonderful verse Brandy, hugs
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Date: 5/16/2024 6:42:00 PM
Thank you Joseph, for sharing your favorite thought. Your kind words are greatly appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 5/15/2024 10:08:00 PM
In such a short poem, you certainly know how to use alliteration. I have much to learn. Victor
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Date: 5/16/2024 6:41:00 PM
So kind of you to say, Victor. I appreciate the compliment. You can write one too, my sweet friend. I believe in you. :)
Date: 5/14/2024 2:43:00 PM
Brandy, your expression of your metaphoric themes is just marvelous with wonderful alliteration that fleshes out your oh so original imagery! Your sense of contentment is palpable! If this is for a contest, best wishes, my friend. Blessings of serenity to you!
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Date: 5/14/2024 7:54:00 PM
Dear Sam, thank you for saying my thoughts are expressive and the theme within is marvelous. My heart is content. :) Such a wonderful feeling, indeed. Even though this isn't for a contest, your kind wishes are appreciated. My best to you, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 5/13/2024 5:38:00 AM
I love this dear Brandy.. The use of metaphors, such as "moments mingled and merged into a messy masterpiece," paints a vivid picture of life's complexity and the beauty that can be found within it. The imagery of pastel thoughts pieced together with prayers evokes a sense of serenity and mindfulness.
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Date: 5/13/2024 6:36:00 PM
Dear Silent One, you're absolutely right about these metaphors. Moments in life can be messy at times, but there's always beauty hidden somewhere deep within. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. I'm completely content caressing the blessings that surround me. My best to you, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 5/11/2024 4:07:00 PM
Your words should be on a Hallmark card- beautiful BEING- <3
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Date: 5/12/2024 5:29:00 PM
Paige, that compliment leaves me in complete awe. My heart is smiling. :) Such a wonderful thing to say, my sweet friend. Thank you so much. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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