To Turn Back Time

If time were reversed I would not betray his love, By finding another.

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Robert Pettit

Date: 2/8/2011 6:01:00 PM

Another nicely written senryu poem. I have to see some more fine work from you.

James Fraser

Date: 8/13/2010 7:20:00 AM

How many of us would want to turn back time, to only realise that it would change where you came back from. Good one Francine >> James

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/12/2010 8:38:00 PM

I think if we could turn back time we would change many things. Good luck in the contest. God Bless Phyl Made me think of the song by Cher "if I can turn back time" wonder if she thought that way. P

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/12/2010 7:42:00 PM

A power packed piece Francine.. good luck in Paula's contest.. should do very well.. awesome.. with luv.. ggood luck...