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To Translate

Ways to communicate Translate A way to form a question to bring an answer Translate The choice to depict the truth when taught To translate a method of language for our body A body of sight that allows us to read Translation of our true abilities The bodies way to visually translate A vision pieced perspective to decode Messages to mend breaking codes To translate to bring into clear message A useful tool explaining all Language to translate body image to see To speak towards sculpting the translations An imaginary line divided by personal frustrations Boundaries and constant limitations The struggle of an honest translation

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Ronald A. Williams

Date: 11/29/2017 7:55:00 AM

A little bit more work can be done. You have a good ideas and thought going on here. Try to be more clear with grouping your thoughts and grammar. Also, this could possible be put in Sonnet form, note the poem "Who but God" by Daniel Turner. Sonnets I guess are very unique, I know because I have not came into to form with one as yet. There are certainly the different line stanza forms which I have utilized. Take care.

Kristina Whitmore
Date: 11/29/2017 11:46:00 AM

Thank you for such a constructive comment! I appreciate the suggestions and look forward to working more on this piece. I believe it is rewarding to have another read my work and assist me with their perspective that may bring more poetic justice. Love the idea about forming a Sonnet even if I have not had many opportunities to write them I will study and try! Have a great day!

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/28/2017 5:34:00 AM

Powerful, thought-provoking poetry, Kristina. Your pen resonates profoundly. Your laser focused words brings much prismatic coherence to my mental molecular vibrations. Collecting refracted thought-light is your divine blessing. A golden pen voice gifted to you, which you graciously have chosen to benevolently share w/us wisdom starved souls. Great poetry. Supernova bright write. Love and joy forever.

Kristina Whitmore
Date: 11/28/2017 11:47:00 AM

With this poem I connected to the imagining of how life may have been for my grandfather whom was a Naval Captain. It was always a dream of mine to follow in his footsteps. I would of work with communications and wrote this to honor that memory of a life path possibility I never accomplished. Thanks again for such a lovely comment! XO

Silent One

Date: 11/4/2017 10:41:00 AM

Now this is an intellectual write... IT s difficult to get an honest translation with so much corrupt tongues out there... excellent write Kristina..

Kristina Whitmore
Date: 11/28/2017 11:43:00 AM

A late reply to a short sweet comment. Thanks Silent One for it is true in translation the corruption of misinterpretation. XO