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To the Tune of Dust Thou Art and To Dust Returnest

(I still admire Shakespearean classic English as it sounded more poetic so I wrote this in that way) O' man thou erecteth palaces, castles and courts while on death a mere grave sufficeth thee How magnificent and formidable thou maketh thy forts in thy wish to make both future and history. Thou who art' accustomed to mighty marble walls and mansions of mirror, silver and gold Thy grave shalt be small compared to palatial halls even if a thousand demons it may hold. Not a coin or even half a coin of gold wilt thou take with thee to thy empty earthen grave All that shalt ye leave behind for others to behold and now shalt ye fear though ere thou hath been brave. Thy innards shalt merge with mere earth soil and sand No matter now if ye dwelled in huts or palaces of gold Thy grave shalt occupy the tiniest portion of thy land From the warmth of quilted beds wilt thee lie in the cold. Thus ere ye consider founding, building thy imposing edifice a homeless vagrant if ye shelter in thine care Knowing our lives art' but on a mere precipice while the joy of giving doth give a joy beyond compare! Death's a journey but no provisions can ye take along and fold How shalt ye respond when it inevitably calls? Our skeletal bones, a simple ditch shalt amass and hold as the living walk all over us with gentle footfalls. Shakespeare too returned to dust as hath saith he and while many might abandon his archaic style yet his quill shalt vie for soul-like immortality for his works might flow on as does the old Nile

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Date: 2/18/2021 9:25:00 AM
Quite interesting, and I especially like the next to last stanza!
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Date: 8/29/2020 9:00:00 PM
"for his works might flow on as does the old Nile" - I like that. I have never tried to write in old English. You did well with it.
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Date: 12/8/2019 6:27:00 PM
My Friend, We are dust and no one knows when they will go. It matters not who you were or what you had. Death is the same and an unknown journey. Live life well and live a good life for when it's gone, it is gone.
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Date: 11/29/2019 7:42:00 AM
When I read the title I got into my mind a poem titled ' I Celebrate Myself' by Walt Whitman. But when I have actually read the poem, the style, the tone, the theme everything is so unique and every line interesting in its own way. Great write! Your choice of words is excellent!
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Date: 11/19/2019 9:09:00 AM
I like this very much being an admirer of ole English ~ Aloha always William
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Date: 10/24/2019 10:35:00 AM
Well quilled Zaynab. I'll pop back for more in time. God Bless. D.
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Date: 10/8/2019 11:20:00 PM
Wonderful, wonderful poetry, the words stimulate, and the adage of W.S superb.
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Date: 10/6/2019 10:40:00 PM
What a wonderful poem and command of the old English language! Woeful and yet skillful. Sadness and beauty emerged. Truth can be painful and yet we hope for forgiveness in our faith in God's grace and heaven.
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Date: 9/27/2019 4:59:00 PM
Very poignant piece of poetry. Like how you wrote it. Very true what you said about not taking worldly things to the grave.
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Date: 9/21/2019 5:51:00 PM
I love this. What skill you have! I haven't read your poems before, but I hope you're continuing to post and I will read.
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Date: 9/11/2019 8:51:00 AM
This is so well done, a very enjoyable read.
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Date: 8/27/2019 12:51:00 AM
Quite beautifully penned, this piece, love the imagery and flow; love, "Knowing our lives art' but on a mere precipice"; such a truth. Old English is a bit difficult; I don't know that I'd even try it. You did it well.
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 8/27/2019 2:01:00 PM
Um yeah it can be difficult and I don't plan to write many in it but for a change as I like Shakespearean poems . Thanks soo much for feedback!
Date: 8/25/2019 12:45:00 PM
- "All that glitters is not gold" ... is one of Shakespeare's quotes ... but, this post is of pure gold S.zaynab - A pleasure to read, many thanks - // Anne-Lise :)
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 8/26/2019 12:21:00 AM
Warmest rhanx sunshine for a shining lovely comment. Didn't know that that was a Shakespearean quote wow, take care.
Date: 8/24/2019 7:47:00 AM
Hello S.zaynab Kamoonpun, you did very well with type of poetry. you also have several comments on this poem as well. I could never do a poem in old English. Well done. Have a nice day my friend..
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/24/2019 12:34:00 PM
You are so welcomed.It would be hard for me to do a poem like that. I like Robert Frost, E.E. Comings. Robert Blake. Have a nice day my friend.
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 8/24/2019 11:32:00 AM
Woah nice to know. I thought it was easier for you guys to do archaic English. Yeah I get comments but only when I invite them, otherwise my poems would be lost in the sea of poetry. Warmest thanks for the comment.
Date: 8/24/2019 7:28:00 AM
I believe Will would be flattered that you conjured him from the great beyond. He was feeling a bit cramped in his small portion of real estate. Well done. Thanks for your visit and Comment.
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 8/24/2019 7:58:00 AM
Ha ha thanks soo much for the giggles you gave me, your fun super comment made me laugh! Am glad to give the old soul bard up there some fresh air and light. Cheers!
Date: 8/24/2019 6:29:00 AM
This is very good, great use of the old English language.. well done..
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 8/24/2019 7:55:00 AM
Glad you know of classic archaic English. Thanks soo much for comment!
Date: 8/24/2019 6:28:00 AM
Very nice rhyming. I can see the thought you put into this. Well done :)
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 8/24/2019 7:54:00 AM
Am glad you get its thoughts. Warmest thanks for feedback!
Date: 8/24/2019 6:03:00 AM
I REPUTER A MAGNIFICENT POETIC WORK A RECREATION OF SHAKESPEARE'S WORK WITHOUT LOSS OF QUALITY.THE TUBE IN WHICH YOU ARE MEASURING INCHES It's the BIGGEST account you have ever had in life ...IT'S GOOD SIZE, NOT SHORT OR BACKGROUND,It is the part that fits you with this huge earth CONGRATS DEAR POET ALKAS ...
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 8/24/2019 7:52:00 AM
Woah thanks so much for a thought provoking comment! Cheers!
Date: 8/24/2019 5:50:00 AM
I feel like you conjured up Shakespeare himself to be your muse, and he was bemused and amused and decided to give you the words. I understand this kind of writing but it is not a natural thing to write, and I am amazed. Both my muse and I are clapping and stomping our feet for this one. Well done!
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 8/24/2019 7:50:00 AM
Hee hee warmest thanks for a delightful cool comment, I hope he didn't mind me copying his style lol. Glad you got the writing. Take care dearest pal??

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