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To the aura who rhymes Premiere Contest Winner

Somewhere deep inside my swirling symphonies, In the blades of silence and the clouds of chaos, I find you , The rhythm of your rhymes, The syllables of your sorrows, The luminosity of your limericks, Cumulating into a concoction of violin vibrancy, A dangerous beauty making words glide far better than olympians on ice, It is there, Seeped elegantly , in the effortlessly executed flows, Your feverish humor and intoxicating zest garnished in a sea of marble magnificence , A magical mind of a musical marvel, You, the aura of rhymes! What a breeze of blessing you have become, to this bruised being that shelters a wounded heart, to this drained dreams that fears the fire that flourishes my art, Thank you to your weaves, The words you wrap around me like a warm horizon, Setting a smile to those who look upon the breathtaking creature you craft.

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Date: 8/31/2024 8:42:00 AM
Fantastic poem! Loved this!
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Date: 8/27/2024 10:31:00 AM
What a wonderful poem of creative images and poetic phrase artistry. Congratulations on your win! Blessings!
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Date: 8/21/2024 8:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win and to the poet you wrote about! What a fantastic contest! Xo
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Date: 8/20/2024 7:18:00 PM
Reading this, I thought this is about Ink Empress. I haven't read Aura's poems, but have noticed her unfailing comments under the poems of Empress. Lioness, your poetry is EXCELLENT. Loved every line of it and I am sure, each word you wrote, you really meant. Congratulations Lioness on Paper for this well deserved trophy win.
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Date: 8/20/2024 2:42:00 AM
'a breeze of blessing' indeed to have such breathtaking poetry by a poetess on a poetess! congratulations. happy writing.
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Date: 8/19/2024 1:37:00 PM
She is a beauty and a talent that you wrote of. Congrats on your win here and also a POTD
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Date: 8/19/2024 12:26:00 PM
"What a breeze of blessing you have become, to this bruised being that shelters a wounded heart, to this drained dreams that fears the fire that flourishes my art" this touched my heart very deeply. how beautiful.
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Date: 8/19/2024 12:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your trophy win and tribute to poetic royalty....
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Date: 8/19/2024 11:28:00 AM
Papi! Look at you! I knew you would win! Told you! Congratulations on your well deserved placement and aura is our beautiful diamond!
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Date: 8/19/2024 10:59:00 AM
Well, I had to pick between two poems in tribute to aura and both were so good but this gem came off the winner! First and foremost it's just great poetry. In addition Aura is worthy of your tribute, though a lesser known here
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Lioness Onpaper
Date: 8/19/2024 11:03:00 AM
Awwwn thank u Tom woody!!! My very first trophy!!!! This is soooo exciting!!! I am soo happy you enjoyed this piece!!! Aura is a true gem worth writing about …
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Date: 8/19/2024 11:02:00 AM
Thank you so much … I’m so glad someone wrote about me and won in the contest . This is great news . Congrats to all the winners
Date: 8/16/2024 4:20:00 AM
Dear Lioness, What a wonderful tribute to Aura! You so deserve to be POTD. I enjoyed reading every single line. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Date: 8/15/2024 7:32:00 PM
' making words glide far better than Olympians on ice. ' Such a wonderful thing to say about Aura. So elegant and graceful are your thoughts. This is a lovely tribute, indeed. Congratulations Lioness, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 8/15/2024 1:00:00 PM
- A lovely tribute :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) -
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Date: 8/15/2024 10:54:00 AM
Congratulations on our "magical" POTD, Lioness. I can hear you roar through your inventive images and cadence of your alliterations. This is a wonderful acknowledgement of the role that the inspiration plays in our lives as writers and how much we long for its presence. So happy to see such a wonderful poem s POTD! Grace and blessings to you.
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Date: 8/15/2024 10:36:00 AM
A nice tribute to I'm sure "A magical mind of a musical marvel" Congratulations on POTD! ~I Am Anaya
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Date: 8/15/2024 9:06:00 AM
Congratulations on the honor of POTD! :)
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Date: 8/15/2024 8:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write/tribute. Have a blessed day writing away..................
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Date: 8/15/2024 5:46:00 AM
Hey nice to see you here. Roar. And such a worthy tribute to a lesser known poet. She's also a wonderful singer and beautiful model. Aura rocks!
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Lioness Onpaper
Date: 8/19/2024 10:57:00 AM
Thank u soo much Tom woody for choosing my piece!! She truly rocks!!!
Date: 8/15/2024 5:25:00 AM
Congratulations o a beautiful poem, and on POTD.
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Date: 8/15/2024 2:39:00 AM
Back to say congratulations on your powerful potd!
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Date: 8/15/2024 2:34:00 AM
Oh your first potd? Congratulations papi! Well deserved! Love that this tribute got recognized
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Date: 8/15/2024 2:27:00 AM
Dear Lioness on paper, Congratulations on this stunning POTD tribute. I loved the alliteration throughout. Enjoy the recognition and have a blessed day..
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Date: 8/15/2024 1:13:00 AM
Wow!what a fabulous tribute, captivating! Warmest congratulations on POTD
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Lioness Onpaper
Date: 8/15/2024 2:22:00 AM
Thank u soo much
Date: 8/15/2024 12:49:00 AM
A lovely tribute to a fine poetic poetess.Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
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Lioness Onpaper
Date: 8/15/2024 2:22:00 AM
Indeed she is a fine poetesss .. thank h beryl
Date: 8/14/2024 2:23:00 PM
Nice play with words on the title.. I see you have also written for the same poet and what a lovely way to do it.. I know you know her so well, so your words must mean so much to her..magical mind of a musical marvel.. great alliteration and lovely description for her.. Best of luck in the contest..
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Lioness Onpaper
Date: 8/15/2024 2:26:00 AM
Thank u brotgaaa she did enjoy our pieces both .. very much
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