Premiere Contest WinnerTo the aura who rhymes

Somewhere deep inside my swirling symphonies, 
In the blades of silence and the clouds of chaos, 
I find you , 
The rhythm of your rhymes, 
The syllables of your sorrows, 
The luminosity of your limericks, 
Cumulating into a concoction of violin vibrancy, 
A dangerous beauty making words glide far better than olympians on ice, 
It is there, 
Seeped elegantly , in the effortlessly executed flows, 
Your feverish humor and intoxicating zest garnished in a sea of marble magnificence , 
A magical mind of a musical marvel, 
You, the aura of rhymes! What a breeze of blessing you have become, 
to this bruised being that shelters a wounded heart, 
to this drained dreams that fears the fire that flourishes my art, 
Thank you to your weaves, 
The words you wrap around me like a warm horizon, 
Setting a smile to those who look upon the breathtaking creature you craft.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Sidwell Avatar
August 31, 2024 at 8:42 AM
Fantastic poem! Loved this!
Kauffman Avatar
August 27, 2024 at 10:31 AM
What a wonderful poem of creative images and poetic phrase artistry. Congratulations on your win! Blessings!
Woods Avatar
August 21, 2024 at 8:44 AM
Congratulations on your win and to the poet you wrote about! What a fantastic contest! Xo
George Avatar
August 20, 2024 at 7:18 PM
Reading this, I thought this is about Ink Empress. I haven't read Aura's poems, but have noticed her unfailing comments under the poems of Empress. Lioness, your poetry is EXCELLENT. Loved every line of it and I am sure, each word you wrote, you really meant. Congratulations Lioness on Paper for this well deserved trophy win.
mysore Avatar
August 20, 2024 at 2:42 AM
'a breeze of blessing' indeed to have such breathtaking poetry by a poetess on a poetess! congratulations. happy writing.
Dietrich Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 1:37 PM
She is a beauty and a talent that you wrote of. Congrats on your win here and also a POTD
Junaid Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 12:26 PM
"What a breeze of blessing you have become, to this bruised being that shelters a wounded heart, to this drained dreams that fears the fire that flourishes my art" this touched my heart very deeply. how beautiful.
One Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 12:23 PM
Congratulations on your trophy win and tribute to poetic royalty....
Empress Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 11:28 AM
Papi! Look at you! I knew you would win! Told you! Congratulations on your well deserved placement and aura is our beautiful diamond!
Rodgers Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 4:20 AM
Dear Lioness, What a wonderful tribute to Aura! You so deserve to be POTD. I enjoyed reading every single line. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Nicole Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 7:32 PM
' making words glide far better than Olympians on ice. ' Such a wonderful thing to say about Aura. So elegant and graceful are your thoughts. This is a lovely tribute, indeed. Congratulations Lioness, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Andresen Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 1:00 PM
- A lovely tribute :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) -
Kauffman Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 10:54 AM
Congratulations on our "magical" POTD, Lioness. I can hear you roar through your inventive images and cadence of your alliterations. This is a wonderful acknowledgement of the role that the inspiration plays in our lives as writers and how much we long for its presence. So happy to see such a wonderful poem s POTD! Grace and blessings to you.
Anaya Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 10:36 AM
A nice tribute to I'm sure "A magical mind of a musical marvel" Congratulations on POTD! ~I Am Anaya
Fowler Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 9:06 AM
Congratulations on the honor of POTD! :)
Goldsmith Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 8:55 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write/tribute. Have a blessed day writing away..................
Greenhough Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 5:25 AM
Congratulations o a beautiful poem, and on POTD.
Jones Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 2:39 AM
Back to say congratulations on your powerful potd!
Empress Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 2:34 AM
Oh your first potd? Congratulations papi! Well deserved! Love that this tribute got recognized
Kaufman Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 2:27 AM
Dear Lioness on paper, Congratulations on this stunning POTD tribute. I loved the alliteration throughout. Enjoy the recognition and have a blessed day..
Seeker Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 1:13 AM
Wow!what a fabulous tribute, captivating! Warmest congratulations on POTD
Onpaper Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 2:22 AM
Thank u soo much
Edmonds  Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 12:49 AM
A lovely tribute to a fine poetic poetess.Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
Onpaper Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 2:22 AM
Indeed she is a fine poetesss .. thank h beryl
One Avatar
August 14, 2024 at 2:23 PM
Nice play with words on the title.. I see you have also written for the same poet and what a lovely way to do it.. I know you know her so well, so your words must mean so much to her..magical mind of a musical marvel.. great alliteration and lovely description for her.. Best of luck in the contest..
Onpaper Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 2:26 AM
Thank u brotgaaa she did enjoy our pieces both .. very much
Jones Avatar
August 13, 2024 at 2:33 PM
Love your command of alliteration and your deep thought provoking words! Nice tribute!
Empress Avatar
August 13, 2024 at 10:23 AM
Wow absolutely stunning how Youv described aura of rhymes! “ The rhythm of your rhymes, The syllables of your sorrows, The luminosity of your limericks, Cumulating into a concoction of violin vibrancy, ” gosh those alliterations and wordpairings and how youv written how she can be versatile in her way of weaving poetry and how much she means to you is beyond beautiful to the eyes and soul! Love this! Best wishes for the contest! Nailed it papi
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