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to FAVE or not to FAVE

To fave or not to fave, is that the question Whether ‘tis nobler to remain silent To hurl faint praise and fortune Suffer the pangs of outrageous doubt Or take up arms against a sightless algorithm And by opposing them. ..To try – to sleep, No more: amid the angst of glory’s glut To write, perchance to dream, now there’s the rub For on that page what words may come When we have shuffled off this muse’s toil Must give us pause --- Where’s the respect That make calamity of so long a write. For who would bear the whims of AI scorn Challenge the oppressor’s right or wrong The pangs of twisted words now on display The insolence the words themselves convey The patient merit the unworthy take With muted words a silenced voice to bare To grunt and swear at writing’s dreary life Ominous tomes unread ‘til after death Discovered on the yellowed pages torn By heirless patrons puzzling the will Makes us cherish still the words we have Than search for others that we know not of Thus, conscience comes before the coward’s fall And thus, the furtive pen seeks retribution “Is sicklied o’er with the pale cast of thought”. And pages filled with pith and frozen moment Without regard are read by minds awry And lose an unsought gain //My sincerest apology to Shakespeare and his minions//

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Date: 10/6/2024 9:59:00 AM
John this was marvelous to read. Thoughtful and clever do not do it justice. I am truly amazed and humbled by this creation of yours. How do you spell Talented, and creativeness? Here's how, John Lawless. A late Congratulations my friend and a Super Honor of POTD that is deserving of this Creative Masterpiece.
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Date: 10/1/2024 9:48:00 AM
I love your whimsy and creativity John. Congratulations on POTD! )
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Date: 9/30/2024 9:54:00 AM
Belated Congratulations on POTD Mr Lawless for a very interesting, creative and clever write! Debx
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Date: 9/16/2024 1:19:00 PM
Ha, ha! Looks like I called this one, my friend! (See below). ~ Gershon
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Date: 9/14/2024 11:52:00 PM
Love it. Congrats on POTD. God bless you with love, Gina
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Date: 9/14/2024 2:37:00 PM
Great one John. Thanks for sharing. Congratulations for POTD.
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Date: 9/14/2024 10:23:00 AM
Dear John, no need to apologize to Shakespeare and his minions. You've truly created a masterpiece here and he would be proud. ' To fave or not to fave. ' The heart knows when. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 9/14/2024 10:20:00 AM
Oh, John...I'll bet Will would have been delighted to read this piece...and not feel "parodied" at all, at all. A wonderful selection for POTD.
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Date: 9/14/2024 9:58:00 AM
AI-Spear…Satis-Spear-faction…A collaborator that shakes the Will’s grave…Congrats on POTD! Great!
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Date: 9/14/2024 9:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your creative write. Have a fun day/weekend with your wonderful win.......................
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Date: 9/14/2024 8:57:00 AM
Clever POTD. Congrats!! :-))
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Date: 9/14/2024 8:02:00 AM
Hello John, well conceived, well written and Bill Shakes would be jealous for you give him competition. A great POTD with many words on display. - Blessings My Friend, Daniel
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Date: 9/14/2024 7:58:00 AM
John, a huge CONGRATS on your well-deserved honor with a poem that has wit, depth, and memorable descriptions. Janice
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Date: 9/14/2024 6:16:00 AM
Great word play, Nice Shakespearean touch, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 9/14/2024 5:50:00 AM
Lawlessness on full display, enjoy your day
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Date: 9/14/2024 5:34:00 AM
John, I enjoyed your creative poem, congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 9/14/2024 4:46:00 AM
Wow creative clever and on point. Congratulations on your amazing potd!
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Date: 9/14/2024 2:36:00 AM
Simply a stunning take on the Bard...most worthy of the honor of POTD and an avalanche of FAVES. Your skills, John, are on full display fuelled by an agility of argument and wit. A delight to read and enjoy.
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Date: 9/14/2024 1:17:00 AM
Hamlet should have spoken your lines. Aye… the faves have made it potd and I will not get myself to a nunnery.
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Date: 9/14/2024 12:43:00 AM
Shakespeare would be proud John, a fave from me, congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
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Date: 9/12/2024 11:46:00 PM
I just want to thank you sincerely for FAVing all my poems :) haha ( kidding) loved the poem.
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Date: 9/12/2024 7:33:00 PM
FAVE, FAVE, FAVE, FAVE, FAVE! POTD... POTW, POTM, POTY! Bravo, John!
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Date: 9/12/2024 6:36:00 PM
I would hope Bard Willie Shake would find humor in thy lines. Perchance the lighthearted whimsical tone in which the poet’s feathered quill tickled his nose as he laughed at his own creation. No muted words or silenced voice from you, sir.
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