to FAVE or not to FAVE

To fave or not to fave, is that the question
Whether ‘tis nobler to remain silent
To hurl faint praise and fortune
Suffer the pangs of outrageous doubt
Or take up arms against a sightless algorithm
And by opposing them.  ..To try – to sleep,
No more:  amid the angst of glory’s glut
To write, perchance to dream, now there’s the rub
For on that page what words may come
When we have shuffled off this muse’s toil
Must give us pause --- Where’s the respect
That make calamity of so long a write.
For who would bear the whims of AI scorn
Challenge the oppressor’s right or wrong
The pangs of twisted words now on display
The insolence the words themselves convey
The patient merit the unworthy take
With muted words a silenced voice to bare
To grunt and swear at writing’s dreary life
Ominous tomes unread ‘til after death
Discovered on the yellowed pages torn
By heirless patrons puzzling the will
Makes us cherish still the words we have
Than search for others that we know not of
Thus, conscience comes before the coward’s fall
And thus, the furtive pen seeks retribution
“Is sicklied o’er with the pale cast of thought”.
And pages filled with pith and frozen moment
Without regard are read by minds awry
And lose an unsought gain

//My sincerest apology to Shakespeare and his minions//
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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October 6, 2024 at 9:59 AM
John this was marvelous to read. Thoughtful and clever do not do it justice. I am truly amazed and humbled by this creation of yours. How do you spell Talented, and creativeness? Here's how, John Lawless. A late Congratulations my friend and a Super Honor of POTD that is deserving of this Creative Masterpiece.
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October 1, 2024 at 9:48 AM
I love your whimsy and creativity John. Congratulations on POTD! )
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September 30, 2024 at 9:54 AM
Belated Congratulations on POTD Mr Lawless for a very interesting, creative and clever write! Debx
Wolf Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 1:19 PM
Ha, ha! Looks like I called this one, my friend! (See below). ~ Gershon
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September 14, 2024 at 11:52 PM
Love it. Congrats on POTD. God bless you with love, Gina
Sands Avatar
September 14, 2024 at 2:37 PM
Great one John. Thanks for sharing. Congratulations for POTD.
Nicole Avatar
September 14, 2024 at 10:23 AM
Dear John, no need to apologize to Shakespeare and his minions. You've truly created a masterpiece here and he would be proud. ' To fave or not to fave. ' The heart knows when. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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September 14, 2024 at 10:20 AM
Oh, John...I'll bet Will would have been delighted to read this piece...and not feel "parodied" at all, at all. A wonderful selection for POTD.
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September 14, 2024 at 9:58 AM
AI-Spear…Satis-Spear-faction…A collaborator that shakes the Will’s grave…Congrats on POTD! Great!
Goldsmith Avatar
September 14, 2024 at 9:23 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your creative write. Have a fun day/weekend with your wonderful win.......................
Parker Avatar
September 14, 2024 at 8:57 AM
Clever POTD. Congrats!! :-))
Rodgers Avatar
September 14, 2024 at 8:02 AM
Hello John, well conceived, well written and Bill Shakes would be jealous for you give him competition. A great POTD with many words on display. - Blessings My Friend, Daniel
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September 14, 2024 at 7:58 AM
John, a huge CONGRATS on your well-deserved honor with a poem that has wit, depth, and memorable descriptions. Janice
May Avatar
September 14, 2024 at 6:16 AM
Great word play, Nice Shakespearean touch, Congrats on POTD
Kitchin Avatar
September 14, 2024 at 5:34 AM
John, I enjoyed your creative poem, congratulations on POTD.
Jones Avatar
September 14, 2024 at 4:46 AM
Wow creative clever and on point. Congratulations on your amazing potd!
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September 14, 2024 at 2:36 AM
Simply a stunning take on the Bard...most worthy of the honor of POTD and an avalanche of FAVES. Your skills, John, are on full display fuelled by an agility of argument and wit. A delight to read and enjoy.
Lane Avatar
September 14, 2024 at 1:17 AM
Hamlet should have spoken your lines. Aye… the faves have made it potd and I will not get myself to a nunnery.
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September 14, 2024 at 12:43 AM
Shakespeare would be proud John, a fave from me, congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
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September 12, 2024 at 11:46 PM
I just want to thank you sincerely for FAVing all my poems :) haha ( kidding) loved the poem.
Wolf Avatar
September 12, 2024 at 7:33 PM
FAVE, FAVE, FAVE, FAVE, FAVE! POTD... POTW, POTM, POTY! Bravo, John!
Lane Avatar
September 12, 2024 at 6:36 PM
I would hope Bard Willie Shake would find humor in thy lines. Perchance the lighthearted whimsical tone in which the poet’s feathered quill tickled his nose as he laughed at his own creation. No muted words or silenced voice from you, sir.
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