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To Captivate In Seconds

~ breathlessly bold I vacillate vicariously the depths of desire desecrate taunting and teasing my poem pretty princess poised perfect sumptuous stimulating and steamy my seven second seduction starts........ ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/24/2011 8:35:00 AM
Artfully done. Congratulations. Joyce
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Date: 11/23/2011 6:01:00 PM
Keep on rockin Rick! what are all those extra seconds for?..... Congratulations to you on your alliterate win here.
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Date: 11/23/2011 12:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in this contest today ^Rick. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/23/2011 9:44:00 AM
When you reach my age Rick, it drops to about five seconds. Bummer. Love the poem though
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Date: 11/21/2011 11:48:00 PM
NIce alliteration, Rick. wow, only seven seconds, huh? That's over with before the poem is read!!
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Date: 11/22/2011 1:28:00 PM
O.K. sassy..........
Date: 11/21/2011 11:37:00 PM
soft alliteration....my poem pretty princess poised perfect....sweeet.
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Date: 11/21/2011 11:01:00 PM
* "Puke * Luv, Sarah." *
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