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To Bloom in Thee I: Pagan Muse Psalm

Shall I compare thee to an onyx rose? Thy thorns draw blood as softly as thy lips, A bloom that drinks the night where moonlight flows, With shadow wine which this mortal sips with willing lips. By torch of bone and ash of laurel leaf, We tread the path where triple faces leer, Twin serpents coil beneath thy midnight sleeves, And stir with lust to taste thy pulse so near. The altar burns with musk and sacred flame, Your breath the incense rising to the skies. I cry thy name in waves of holy shame, And lose myself in temples of thy thighs. O dark enchantress, bound in root and rite— In thee I bloom, in thee I taste the night.

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Date: 5/27/2025 6:50:00 AM
Whoa i love the lines “Your breath the incense rising to the skies. I cry thy name in waves of holy shame,” gosh thats impressive sis! Youv nailed it! And in such eloquence! Im impressed once again! I must say that both the takes are my faves! I love every word in both! Pleasure reading your sonnets today! Sending you light always
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Billie Jama
Date: 5/27/2025 8:25:00 AM
Awe thanks you such sis. Your comments always uplift me
Date: 5/27/2025 6:36:00 AM
Not always is a flower indelicate to the touch of one who makes it bloom. Leering faces have no place in judging others. Tender verses, Billie.
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Billie Jama
Date: 5/27/2025 8:23:00 AM
Indeed my Onyx Rose is more like a deadly nightshade. So I'll die on that alter also every time. Many thanks Lin

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