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I am so proud of me and that is not conceit, for I have crawled too many times from great despair; climbing from dark pits of nothingness to defeat, weep, weeping, whispering a heavenly prayer. For I have crawled too many times from great despair, I now use my learned skill of writing to let go; weep, weeping, whispering a heavenly prayer, sharing experiences caresses my woe. I now use my learned skill of writing to let go, dark death found me young taking my sister away; sharing experiences caresses my woe, my family just names engraved in a stone grey. Dark death found me young taking my sister away, I have been humbled and have found my sublime peace; my family just names engraved in a stone grey, but in my heart forever lost love has a piece. I have been humbled and have found my sublime peace, climbing from dark pits of nothingness of defeat; but in my heart forever lost love has a piece, I am so proud of me and that is not conceit. ______________________ January 24, 2021 Poetry/Pantoum/To Be Proud Copyright Protected, ID 01-1323-491-24 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest Proud Pantoum sponsor, Caren Krutsinger, Judged 27/02/2021 Third Place

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Date: 2/28/2021 12:56:00 PM
Great Rhyming Pantoum , Constance, love reading; still another part of you .Congratulations on your win . Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/28/2021 2:26:00 PM
Eve, thanks for the compliment, the comment and the congratulations, appreciate _Constance
Date: 1/30/2021 7:39:00 AM
A well written Pantoum to show your self-worth, Constance.
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Date: 1/30/2021 8:38:00 AM
Jenna, thank you for the visit and the compliment, appreciate _Constance
Date: 1/24/2021 4:14:00 PM
Constance, your beautiful heartfelt poem touched me deep. I think you’re an amazing strong person, and you’re inspire me greatly... Best wishes dear.
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Date: 1/25/2021 7:26:00 AM
Kina, thank you for the compliment on my poem and me, appreciate so much _Constance

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