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To Ask For Pardon, My Love

I knew I was the sole searcher.
Like a rose dying in the desert.
And all the loneliness she felt.
The piercing pains, oh how they hurt.

I can't turn the clock back, can I?
Wish to be where we were before.
Euphoric bliss of love we built,
Until I lost my head once more.

It was not long ere I discerned,
What a fool I really was
Yet what excuse could I invent?
She knew quite well I was the cause.

She roamed the crowded streets alone
Refusing all the calls I made
Preferred to die in loneliness, 
Perhaps it was right that I paid.

I had no real intention
Of letting her go without me,
I climbed the stairs and waited.
An hour meant nothing to me.

She appeared, forlorn, teary-eyed.
Surprised she stood tall and defiant.
On my knees, I begged a pardon.
I loved her, she had to agree.
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Elliott Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 8:41 AM
A masterpiece poem, Victor. You have a very romantic and caring heart and soul. Have a grand poetry day. Blessings to you and your's.
Proxenos Avatar
February 25, 2024 at 10:34 AM
And another masterful love poem from you dear friend. you have a talent for writing exceptional love poems - so well penned. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
Poet Avatar
February 23, 2024 at 1:16 PM
Back with congratulations on your weekly 3rd POTD. Quite an achievement and much acclaim, Victor.
Kitchin Avatar
February 23, 2024 at 3:39 AM
Victor, this has been a great week for you, congratulations on your third POTD with your romantic poem.
Andresen Avatar
February 23, 2024 at 1:50 AM
- Wow...another p.o.t.d., Victor....you are in the wind...congratulations so much...enjoy :) - hugs
Williams Avatar
February 23, 2024 at 1:48 AM
Wow, you're on fire, dear Victor. Three POTDs in a week is quite the achievement. Congratulations once again...Hugs
Edmonds  Avatar
February 23, 2024 at 12:58 AM
Dear Victor, we all at some point in our lives have hurt the one we love and vice versa. We have to forgive ourself and others as the bible says. A marvellous write so worthy of you having received the honour of poem of the day. Blessings, Beryl
Jones Avatar
February 23, 2024 at 12:51 AM
I love it when a man humbles himself. This is engaging and surely he has a chance at forgiveness. Congratulations on yet another potd Victor!
Seeker Avatar
February 23, 2024 at 12:50 AM
Oh wowzee! A fabulous write, Victor, maybe your best yet, warmest congratulations on POTD
Cunningham Avatar
February 23, 2024 at 12:35 AM
You're doing well Victor, three potds in a week. Big congratulations to you. Tom
Greenhough Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 9:41 PM
:"I can't turn the clock back, can I ?:, brings this poem to the present of a story with a past. I hope he is able to repair his romance. I feel the depths of your words.
Roper Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 7:32 PM
Deep and sad , very well done. Hugs my friend
Rose  Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 6:39 PM
Sometimes we hurt those we love the most Victor, life isn't easy, but love always finds a way, nicely said, :)
Baker Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 3:54 PM
Emotionally deep and engaging poetry, Victor. It takes a strong person to ask for forgiveness or a pardon from someone they hurt. This was a good message to share with your readers, some may have a need to ask for forgiveness or to forgive someone that hurt them. Both ways at least one will be blessed. A willingness to face the music is a strong indicator of the character of a person. Thanks for sharing your mindful poetry with us, my friend. A FAV for my list! Bill
Rolland Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 3:44 PM
so touching words, i love the final word, she has to admit, how passionate poem, thanks poet
May Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 1:50 PM
One more chance to seek pardon and let the rose bloom once more, Very nicely penned Victor
Rodrigues Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 12:46 PM
Recompense brought forth the hopeful effect. Great story.
Buehler Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 12:33 PM
Victor, your well composed tale seemed to be headed for a sad ending. It was marvelous to instead witness the magic of forgiveness. Great writing!
Poet Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 11:13 AM
In this remarkable poem, you display a profound understanding of the complexities of love and forgiveness. The themes of reconciliation resonate deeply, capturing the universal experience of navigating the challenges of relationships. Bravo, Victor, for crafting such a moving piece of literature.
Hind Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 10:22 AM
Ah, a good ending. I am happy for you
Anaya Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 10:05 AM
Oh, I'm relieved he saw his love once more to ask for forgiveness. He is a lucky man to be so loved. I enjoy your romantic tales now more than ever! xo
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 9:49 AM
- Yes, really sad ... the one who could turn the clock back ... we all think at one time or another, Victor - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 9:25 AM
Sad one. Well, I don't know if it is a work from the heart of a person broken from lost love or just one what a person can imagine, but it has good feeling, rhythm, rhyme and flow. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara k
Pandit Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 5:46 AM
All is well that ends well. I like the vibes reconciliation and forgiveness.
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February 22, 2024 at 2:04 AM
Ooof, Victor. Love can be tough sometimes. I think we have all been there. Best Cindy x
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