To -- Barbara
A Quatern by HGarvey Daniel Esquire ( My First )
Growing old together with YOU
Watching Sunrises and Sunsets
Holding hands, enjoying the view
Memories one never forgets
Serenity, Tranquility
Growing old together with YOU
At peace through all Eternity
Forever, I’ll only Love YOU
You give me Love I never knew
You created a dream, come True
Growing old together with YOU
A Love Forever, Always True
Our Hearts beat together, entwine
Our Happiness, well over do
The Wonderful thought in my mind
Growing Old Together With YOU
The Quatern is a Quatrain that may or may not rhyme has an eight syllable
per line
count The quirk of this form of POETRY is repitition of the first line of the poem
moving down a line in each stanza so the first line is also the last
My problem was having the repititive line fit in and have the next stanza
make sense I would recommend that beginners and novice POETS could
practice this form to improve their perspective of POETRY
I do believe I will try other new to me Forms Always...HG
Dedicated to BARBARA JEAN
Copyright © Hgarvey Daniel Esquire | Year Posted 2010
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