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Title Wave

I rode upon an "emerald ocean", as I enjoyed the "magic of the night". The sky was "dappled in light and fairy dust". bringing hope to my "sad blue heart". As I enjoyed the "magic of the night" I was "seeing beyond the seen". Bringing hope to my "sad blue heart". It was like being "asleep with my eyes wide open". I was "seeing beyond the seen". My descriptive powers "inadequate to the task". It was like being "asleep with my eyes wide open". I felt like I was "tasting bliss". My descriptive powers "inadequate to the task". It was like being part of an "ancient prayer". I felt like I was "tasting bliss". A "blind judge" who had regained his sight. It was like being part of an "ancient prayer". Taking a few steps "beyond the walls of innocence". A "blind judge" who had regained his sight. "Melted tears" bring "freedom" at last! Taking a few steps "beyond the walls of innocence". The sky was "dappled in light and fairy dust". "Melted tears" bring "freedom" at last! I rode "upon an emerald ocean".

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Adam Hapworth

Date: 9/5/2013 7:50:00 AM

Very Nice, Both of the Title poems you wrote would have made the cut :) Thanks for entering the contest and enjoying the idea so much.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/5/2013 8:33:00 AM

My pleasure Adam

Richard D Seal

Date: 8/31/2013 6:26:00 PM

WOW Rick, this is a wonderful story in its own right, never mind the amazing way you've brought the titles together, great piece of imagination. Take care, Richard

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/5/2013 8:32:00 AM

Thanks Richard.

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 8/19/2013 6:53:00 AM

Impressive piece Richard.Your rhythm was truly excellent which I like very much.Have a great day Richie.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/19/2013 7:16:00 AM

Thanks MH

Honestly J.T.

Date: 8/18/2013 7:08:00 PM

Nicely done, I love the titles

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/18/2013 7:14:00 PM

Thanks Justice. I like your pen name it makes me think of the wild west!

Donna Jones

Date: 8/18/2013 2:52:00 PM

Wow...I think I love this one more than the first one....or at least as much...now you have to choose!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/18/2013 7:14:00 PM

This one has to many lines so I must stick with the first one.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/18/2013 12:55:00 PM

Lovely, Richard....I've got to find some new adjectives! By the way...shouldn't the freedom in the last line before the last have quotation marks? Hope you are having a good Sunday...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/18/2013 7:19:00 PM

Yes, thanks for catching it.

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/18/2013 10:03:00 AM

Beyond the walls of innocence sad blue heart got the adequate rhythm through prayer and got freedom upon an emerald ocean of beautiful thought. Excellent beauty you have depicted with acute sensation. Enjoyed a lot. Loved always, bl

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/18/2013 10:16:00 AM

Thanks bl