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Tis the Season

Tis The Season Tis the time of this fond season Season to be filled with love Love has borne a beautiful Child Child created from above Above you hear the church bells ring Ring in loud the yuletide songs Songs of joy with rhythm that flows Flows the coldness that will bring Bring the snow that lathers dwellings and trees Trees as garnished lighted shrines Shrines that denote a Christmas time Christmas time for you and me Chain Verse 1 Contest Sponsored by Edward Ebbs Ralph Sergi December 19, 2015

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Date: 1/5/2016 12:15:00 AM
Ralph, Nice win... ~LINDA~
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 1/5/2016 6:36:00 AM
Hi Linda: Thank you for sharing and I hope you had a nice holiday.
Date: 1/3/2016 6:34:00 PM
Hi BW: Thank you for your kind words and I hope you had a nice New Year.
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Date: 1/3/2016 6:12:00 PM
Ralph, you have penned some beautiful lines in rhyme poem, I am loving this 7 ~
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Date: 1/3/2016 5:51:00 PM
Oh, I heard about this one that Ed missed and I am here to say congratulations. VERY NICE job, Ralph. I am glad Edward added it to the list.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 1/3/2016 6:39:00 PM
Hi Andrea: I don't usually write Holiday poems so there is a bit of Irony in that.I enjoyed writing it
Date: 1/3/2016 5:23:00 PM
Thank you for participating in this chain verse form, you did a good job and congrats on your placement...I made a mistake, your poem was missed and I hope this some how rights that mistake.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 1/4/2016 8:06:00 AM
Hi Edward: Thanks for being thoughtful and bringing that to my attention.
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Edward Ebbs
Date: 1/3/2016 6:48:00 PM
Your poem was missed between Round #2 and Round #3 so it appeared to be an NA, but your poem should have moved to Round #3 to be placed with the others...this was my mistake. So when a poem is not placed it gets an NA automatically. Again, thank you for participating, I regret this oversite and could not let is pass. It would not be the right thing to do...
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 1/3/2016 6:41:00 PM
Hi Edward: Thanks for the placement but it was an N/A
Date: 12/19/2015 6:29:00 PM
fine way to view the celebration of this season, ralph... good one!,,huggs
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