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Tired Tears

Tired Tears Who am I, in*** this corrosive eye to cry these******** traveling tears. For I will defend****( )**** my will to mend the oceans of many************years.So I fly away with skies of*********gray to soulful saving**** spheres. I Am Lost In a sea Of falling Toxic tears Loosing logic Of internal fears Send me home To embryos Dome A Bed That’s Inner safe For this old Sensitive waif Lachrymal death One last breath The salty sea To bury Me No More Tired tears For I have gone To a brand new Distant dawn That I may Spawn. ... ^^^^ ............... ^^^^^^^^^^^ .................................... ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ DEC.24.2016 Cutting Words - Contest Sponsored by: FJ Thomas

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Date: 7/22/2017 9:41:00 AM
Beautifully wrote and thought out "Winged Warrior" hope to see more along these lines - Indiana x x x
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Date: 2/8/2017 12:44:00 PM
WOW! I've never seen one like this before. It's an exceptional outstanding piece of work. BEAUTIFUL ^_*
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Date: 2/5/2017 3:46:00 PM
Both the content and shape deserve appreciation, WW. Congratulations on your merited podium finish! Regards // paul
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Date: 2/5/2017 1:23:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats ^WW^ :-) I can see why Flo loved this so much:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/3/2017 10:36:00 PM
Magnificent! Worth the long wait in judging, a quality piece. Your graphic is well-done as well-done as the words which it represents. Congratulations, WW.
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Date: 2/3/2017 9:33:00 PM
Winged Warrior, you have created such amazing eye and teardrop shapes filled with deep thoughts. Congratulations on your 2nd Place podium win! Sandra
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Date: 2/3/2017 3:39:00 PM
Wow! this is fabulous ^WW^ and a fav. congratulation Hugs
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Date: 12/28/2016 10:16:00 AM
Good Luck!
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Date: 12/27/2016 2:52:00 PM
- A wonderful poem and shape, W.W. - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/27/2016 12:12:00 AM
This is a masterclass! I love your creativity, warrior. Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 12/26/2016 3:33:00 PM
Oh!! My Goodness that's good!!! Fabulous poem as well as your shape!! Well done WW!!! Best wishes for the contest!! Big Hugggs. Deb:)
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Date: 12/26/2016 4:55:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Deborah...god bless...^WW^
Date: 12/25/2016 5:25:00 AM
Hope your tears can become joyful ones this Christmas. You are in our prayers. Your poem was worth the visit. I am sure it will set the Bar high for the contest. Best regards David
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Date: 12/26/2016 4:53:00 PM
Thank you so much David...god bless...^WW^
Date: 12/24/2016 9:54:00 PM
This is awesome! And no more tears! Merry Christmas, WW...
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Date: 12/26/2016 4:52:00 PM
Thank you my friend Rebecca...god bless...^WW^
Date: 12/24/2016 6:55:00 AM
WOW! WOW WOW:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/26/2016 4:51:00 PM
Thank you, my dear Jan...god, bless...^WW^
Date: 12/24/2016 1:16:00 AM
Wow WW, you are so creative...anyone can make the shape of tears with some effort but to make their shapes with such brilliant words would be a real challenge and you managed it beautifully! Happy Holidays my friend. Mele Kalikimaka! 7 : )
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Date: 12/26/2016 4:49:00 PM
Thank you so much Connie...god bless...^WW^

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