Tiny Grains of Sand

Time fleeting by… like tiny grains of sand falling through our fingers, When we know, hands are empty... the moment has passed! Grasp, seize the moments. For "Bite-size Poems No. 34"Poetry Contest Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 2/19/2022 4:40:00 PM

Hello Malabiki ... what a wonderful expression and it's quite a powerful message indeed - thanks Malabika - Lindsay

Jcb Brul

Date: 1/31/2022 2:29:00 PM

So true..Time is fleeting and we can't hold every moment..We can just savour before it slips through our fingers. Inspiring piece!

Susan Lawrence

Date: 1/28/2022 6:35:00 PM

Yes precious moments in time pass without a whisper . Seize the moments … kiss them … treasure them . Beautiful Mala ! Susan:)

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/28/2022 6:40:00 PM

Thanks, Susan. Really appreciate your beautiful comment.

Valsa George

Date: 1/26/2022 8:26:00 PM

Time slips away like granules of sand and it happens without our knowledge. Sadly the lost time cannot be retrieved . Lovely penning Mala !

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/27/2022 5:30:00 PM

Thanks, Valsa. Appreciate your thoughtful comment.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 1/25/2022 5:12:00 PM

Indeed, Malabika our time (our particular time) doesn't wait for anyone. It is ours alone to deal with, enjoy, use, pass... whatever. Most of all, it is NOT ours to waste! Good write, my friend.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/25/2022 5:14:00 PM

Thanks, Milton. Very true..I am trying not to waste. BW ~ Mala