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Tinderbox

Sept. 11. is a dark and fateful day, No one wants to live through. A plane plummeted into the World Trade Center And in minutes it turned into a tinderbox. With a flash of light and a thunderous boom, Billows of smoke darkened the sky. Crimson flames rose high and danced in the air, Turning hundreds into mere cinders! Such atrocities are vicious and repeated Caused by tempestuous passions and brutish urges Violence erupts as pressure builds inside No warning, no alarm siren Sudden spurt of lava, effacing life, love, and dreams War drums, grenades, gun shots Fire spitting dragons of tanks Sizzling missiles and bombs Screams, wails, and bloodshed Pale faced grimace of death! It’s up to us to decide if we should be agents of peace Or tinderboxes, highly inflammable! Milton the blind bard of England sang “Peace hath her victories No less renowned than war” Let no man take up arms against another For when peace dwells within There shall be peace without!
October- 27.2022 ~ Placed Second~ This or That- Vol.14. Poetry Contest Sponsor- Edward Ibeh

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Date: 11/11/2022 9:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/11/2022 8:01:00 PM
Comparison of September 11 and tinderbox is great. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/11/2022 3:35:00 PM
Moving and powerful 9/11 poem, Valsa. We will never forget! Congratulations on your win in my contest! Well-deserved.
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Valsa George
Date: 11/12/2022 8:22:00 PM
Thanks a lot Edward for your well conducted contests and for picking up my poem for a win.... ! I feel obliged
Date: 11/11/2022 3:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved victory! Valsa, my dear friend. What lovely poetry you've created, with a well-stated message.
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Date: 11/11/2022 2:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your deserving win! Valsa we must never forget and teach everyone about peace! We are celebrating Veteran's Day here, see every day is a celebration! ;)
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Date: 10/27/2022 5:35:00 PM
What a beautiful, perfectly written message, and as a Christian I thoroughly agree with you, for "Peacekeepers shall be called the children of God"
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Date: 10/27/2022 1:02:00 PM
Accurate and wise words, my poet friend. Great entry for the contest! Good luck! Have a joyful day, Valsa. Bill
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Date: 10/27/2022 11:01:00 AM
All those people died - lives destroyed and property lost because a few Arabs believed Allah would reward them with virgins in Heaven! We MUST improve education internationally! Aloha!
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Date: 10/28/2022 5:16:00 AM
Quite true.... dear Rico ! Only through the right kind of education, children can be corrected from such crazy notions. Thanks a lot....
Date: 10/27/2022 10:44:00 AM
Great imagery and memory of sad feeling of a violent action. We all have to be united of peace. Good luck in the contest. Many blessings to you my friend and wishes come true.
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Date: 10/27/2022 5:48:00 AM
It's so hard to relive that horrific day and years of pain that followed. Tensions build and blow up. Too much hate in this world. Well done with this poem, Valsa. Best to you.
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Date: 10/27/2022 1:00:00 AM
Your final two lines point out to us why we can never live in peace. I'll never forget the useless disaster of the Twin Towers. I saw it on TV.
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Date: 10/27/2022 12:09:00 AM
Violence never solves problems, it just creates even more. We all long for a peaceful world but a minority don't. Best of luck in the contest Valsa. Tom
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Date: 10/27/2022 12:00:00 AM
Food for thought, Valsa. Sudden death noticed, slow poison ignored ~ moment by moment, by brutality gored.
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