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Artwork: Stelle Aperte by Sergio Padovani For Sara Jama - Time Stops for No One contest

 

I value safety as I swim whilst made of shadows crashing into the unbreakable surface tension Should it rupture I'd lay exhausted - all limbs and branches tangled in roots The sky only witnessed through the lens of somebody else's eye Faint glows of imagination keep me kicking compelled by the slew of demons snapping constantly at my heels - all too ready to consume Night brings evenly spaced stars too regular to be real dark coagulates within the panic button the evaporata makes promises it can't keep yet I'd smash my hand through if I could reach Thoughts trick and tarnish tell me there's no way out til dark and light meld effortlessly to be blindly followed and trap me in place Reality reveals the moon floating on the water with a mirror of itself above and every bit of symmetry echoes within this shadowy self I occupy threatening to disperse And time ticks on I should grow my nails long or pick clean the bones of my fingertips until I can claw myself to freedom obtain a vantage point plan beyond the second in front And I pray Let me outpace the enemy on solid ground or be buried beneath it

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Date: 1/31/2025 7:10:00 AM
Congratulations in placing in my contest. "Til dark and light meld effortlessly to be blindly followed and trap me in place," exquisitely represents how light and dark meld perfectly together until the light gets swallowed and all that reminds is dark. Working to keep you trapped within the confines of your mind. "Compelled by the slew of demons snapping constantly at my heels - all too ready to consume," shows how our thoughts can turn against us. Trapping us, alone to battle for each breath.
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Date: 1/31/2025 7:41:00 AM
Thank you so much for this high placement, I enjoyed your contest. Glad you liked the poem :)
Date: 1/29/2025 3:23:00 AM
Dear DD, I absolutely love the artwork youv used, so deep and intriguing! And youv written a poem that fits the artwork in such an eloquent manner, i love especially how youv written, "Thoughts trick and tarnish tell me there's no way out" clever word choices there! "I should grow my nails long or pick clean the bones of my fingertips until I can claw myself to freedom" ah that made me smile as i have long nails but maybe not long enough to claw myself to freedom! The way youv also painted imagery here is so beautiful and can tell what the art is about through your words! Youv definitely nailed it! I have a feelin sara will love this. Best wishes in the contest, sending you light always
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Date: 1/29/2025 8:15:00 AM
Thank you Ink - I tried something new and wrote this one on an exercise bike :) did a bit of fine tuning off the bike though. There was so much in the painting to go on! I really wanted to build in something about chromium with it's ethereal silver white colour and weak magnetic qualities but couldn't figure out a way. Thank you for stopping by and your kind words

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