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Time I Hate You I love to Hate You. You are too late, too early, too fixed, too fluid, too much, too little, too… I need you. I want more of you. I can’t stand they way you use me, I should be using you. I want to hug you, sometimes. The perfection of your second hand, The slim line of the small, yet important fixed soul mate. One is not the same without the other. Much like those we touch, much like those we remember, or wish that we could meet. Time, I hate YOU! I love YOU! I hate to love you, and love to hate you! A measured amount, only “He” knows. Some a lifetime, Others only a heartbeat. Precious, measurable, and immeasurable. Forever.

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Date: 12/2/2019 8:44:00 PM
good write...time can be our best friend or worst enemy depending on the moment at hand... enjoyed this one my friend, well crafted! hugs :)
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Date: 12/2/2019 4:57:00 PM
Hello Ann ... a wonderful take on how we judge time indeed. Time doesn't heed us though; it just keeps marching on - thanks Ann - Lindsay
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Date: 12/2/2019 11:43:00 AM
Anne, this is quite wonderful and well written!
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Ann Foster
Date: 12/2/2019 12:09:00 PM
Ty for you kind comments. Blessings on your life. Ann