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Time For a Change

Thank you to all that 
are here on the soup,
you have helped me so 
much and have been a great group.

I have taken all your comments
and kind words to heart,
now it is up to me,to
make a fresh start.

It's time for me to reach
out and seek GOD'S hand,
listen closely to his words,
and try to understand.

I know I can't change,
unless I put up a fight,
it is now time for me,
to make things right.

Every morning I wake,
I will reach for a goal,
say a prayer,
and cleanse my soul.

Don't think I didn't listen,to
all the advise you gave to me,
I know that love and prayer,
will be what sets me free.


                         YOUR SOUPER FRIEND

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 5/12/2013 1:06:00 PM
Aww! So nice! I love your poetry! Never stop writing!! :D
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Date: 3/16/2010 10:21:00 AM
We all appreciate you too my dear friend Colleen. Look at all these wonderful comments left from us for you sincerely. Best Wishes Always, Bill
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Date: 2/8/2010 5:05:00 AM
Don't know how I missed this one. What a beautiful rhyme and so heartfelt ! Keep up the good work, Colleen. Lightwalker
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Date: 1/25/2010 8:22:00 PM
Dear Colleen, Keep this Godly Feeling with YOU in all YOUR daily deeds and in YOUR POETRY and HE will bring YOU out of YOUR depression YOU can see the Light now go after it with eyes wide open I Pray for YOU daily and I know GOD answers Prayers Any time YOU want to talk Soup mail me My LOVE to YOU : Child of GOD LOVE ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 1/22/2010 8:12:00 PM
Beautiful and emotional expressions of your feelings Colleen.. u have come a long way ... and am proud to call u my friend.. keep up the great writes and good progress in your life... thankxxx for your great comments on my poetry... have to play catch up now that I am back... talk soon.. oh.. Doug is back too... he posted some new poetry ... luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 1/20/2010 7:43:00 AM
this is a beautiful rhyme... I love the 5th stanza! Truly amazing :D -Echo
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Date: 1/16/2010 5:38:00 PM
This is really great an i know i have not commented much or anything but this is such a great dedication to those who have. I will definatly start reading and commenting more.
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Date: 1/16/2010 3:13:00 PM
I think we only commented a few times to each other. But I am glad to hear you had so many that helped you! NIce write and best wishes. Andrea
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Date: 1/16/2010 10:15:00 AM
So simple and so Great. It is really a beautiful Poem so nicely written and taking the whole PS with the poet. What a wonderful write. My good wishes and love for a bright tomorrow morning and night. I am writing a love Story with adventure the boatman’s Song hope you would like it Ravindra
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Date: 1/16/2010 8:43:00 AM
Colleen, this tribute is gracefully constructed with loving flow and sincerity! you are very talented! keep up the inspiring art you graciously share! love, jimbo
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Date: 1/15/2010 2:56:00 PM
Such a nice change in topic, Colleen. We can really see your talent coming through. Best wishes always! Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 1/14/2010 12:01:00 PM
we are always here for you! never forget that. new poem posted =]
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Date: 1/11/2010 7:37:00 PM
Very nice poem Colleen...I am praying for your much deserved health...Marty
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Date: 1/11/2010 2:08:00 PM
Hiya Colleen, sorry i am late in commenting. This is a kool piece, its going to be so good reading a different you. Keep writing girl, and the Soupers will keep reading >> James
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Date: 1/11/2010 9:54:00 AM
A wonderful poem, Colleen, and great news! May the Lord make your burdens light. I pray peace and love be with you both day and night. Let your faith guide you and remember my thoughts are with you always. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 1/11/2010 1:59:00 AM
I heard John Astin sing a song today in church; "No wave ever leaves the ocean; nothing that arises ever escapes the sea; there can be no returning to what we've always been." The imagery reminds us that even when we seem to wander off, or forget, or deny, or resist, the essential truth of our being is that we are a wave in the Great Ocean of God's Love. I find that comforting. This is a beautiful poem Colleen. You've turned your gaze back to Truth. Remember-Praise, Gratitude, Love, Compassion
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Date: 1/10/2010 11:05:00 PM
Now, this is more like it. You have a poetic gift, Colleen. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Lainie
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Date: 1/10/2010 9:27:00 PM
Very nice and so glad to read this. Take good care and God bless. May you find liberation. Your poet friend, Caroline.
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Date: 1/10/2010 8:25:00 PM
Bravo Colleen, Awesome verse, You've written a beautiful tribute to your friends, who love you very much. God bless you, I will continue to pray for you also as you make good choices. Thanks for you most gracious comment on my verses. Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 1/10/2010 4:21:00 PM
Nicely written tribute to all the supporters that you have had in your distressful time. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 1/10/2010 3:11:00 PM
very nice,Colleen. Beautiful goal commitment here and a very well written poem to describe your situation and gratefulness. Awesome. Just one day at a time or one minute ata time..whatever works and it will work with prayer as all these good folks here have said. Congrats on a nice poem. Thanks for your comments. Robert.
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Date: 1/10/2010 3:05:00 PM
Great spirit Colleen!Make simple goals for each day. Do 1 thing for yourself to make you happy & 1 for someone else in need! Light & Love
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Date: 1/10/2010 2:55:00 PM
Thanks for hanging in there, We all have been there when it seems all is lost. But much more can be gained...Raul
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Date: 1/10/2010 2:11:00 PM
This brings so much joy to my heart this Sunday afternoon, Colleen!! I can hear the change in your words! Please keep on writing, keep on praying, we'll be praying for you too! Ask God to send some good people into your life for support and friendship and whatever you do ask him first. He's always with you, you know that. Look how far you have come!! Take care. Peace, Audrey
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Date: 1/10/2010 1:15:00 PM
I do love this, Colleen. You have set a good goal. God can set you free and cleanse your soul. You just have to hold on with both hands and all of your heart. Forgive mistakes...yours... and others. And make a fresh start each day. God bless you, dear child of God, Colleen. You are in my prayers. Love to you. Dane Ann
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