Time

Sheila asked him
“Do you have the time?”
Ben answered “It’s five after two.” She responded “That is a perfectly good answer, but that is not the answer to my question.”
He responded “I’m sorry, I don’t understand, you don’t want to know the time?” “That’s right.” Sheila said. “I asked, " Do you have the time?”
Ben looked perplexed “The time for what?” Sheila’s eyebrow raised just a bit, “Well that’s up to you isn’t it?”

Big Ben paused for just a second. “Wasn’t his whole existence about time?” Over a Hundred and sixty years he had been marking time. In fact the people of London have always looked up to him. Who was she to question him about time? Because of her he lost a second. How would he get it back? He thought a bit more, “That was the first second he had ever had to himself!” I guess Sheila will get her answer afterall, he does indeed have the time.  In the end a Clock can’t make time but perhaps one named Ben can keep some for himself.
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Babcock Avatar
May 6, 2024 at 10:13 AM
Very creative Richard and like the personification used on this poem. A fun read. love phyl.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 6:47 AM
Thanks Phyllis, I enjoyed writing it.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 29, 2024 at 9:51 AM
I enjoyed reading your very creative "Time" write. I wish you would write more.... Have a fun day writing away.....................
Lamoureux Avatar
April 29, 2024 at 11:01 AM
Thanks Paula. These days I’m posting more on Facebook. I appreciate your kind words.
Proxenos Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 12:12 AM
I love this personification ot time I guess we need each other as earthing else does to survive, time needs us to record it and we need time in our lives. Awesome poem my friend,hope you are keeping well Blessings Jennifer
Lamoureux Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 12:59 PM
You as well. Thanks for the visit and comment.
Rose  Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 1:23 PM
lol this is so creative, Richard :)
Lamoureux Avatar
April 20, 2024 at 7:37 PM
Thanks, I had fun writing it.
Walsh Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 2:15 AM
Interesting write perhaps with a different answer if time wasn’t considered linear! Lol . . . I’m musing! Great write as ever fella.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 6:42 AM
Thanks for giving it a read.
Buhagiar Avatar
April 5, 2024 at 2:44 AM
Great personification. Time is essential. We need it every day.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 5, 2024 at 6:29 AM
Or maybe time needs us? Otherwise who would mark and record its passing?
Manassian Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 11:59 AM
Thanks for the visit, Richard. I'm glad I read this piece tonight. Thanks for drawing me back. I should always make time for friends like you! Creative piece. I enjoyed it.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 12:04 PM
Nice to see you. If you have a chance read my “Obsessed” I think it’s in your wheelhouse. ;0)
Empress Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 10:45 AM
How clever is this personification! I absolutely love the way youv written and delivered this in such a creative manner. “ in the end a clock cant make time” couldnt have said it any better! Pleasure reading this.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 12:05 PM
Thanks, I had fun writing this one.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 12:04 PM
Thanks, I had fun writing this one.
Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 11:10 PM
Very unique poetry, Richard. I always thought Big Ben was from the 1800s. But I guess it must be younger than I imagined!
Lamoureux Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 5:25 AM
It was built in 1859. Thanks for giving this one a read Andrea. ;0)
George Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 9:31 PM
Indeed Big Ben also needs a little time for himself. For the past hundred and odd years, he has been working relentlessly. First I thought this was a conversation between a husband and wife. You have a unique way of approaching each topic. I enjoyed reading your semi-humorous poem, dear Richard.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 5:26 AM
That was what aI was going for. Thanks for giving my poem a read.
Greenhough Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 8:50 PM
This poem was enjoyable. I guess it's similar to "do you have a minute?".
Lamoureux Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 8:54 AM
Hahaha ok, I get it.
Greenhough Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 7:28 AM
"I want to talk with you. Do you have a minute?" People say it all the time.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 9:04 PM
Thanks for giving it a read. What is “do you have a minute?”
One Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 5:40 AM
Your personification presents a clever and thought-provoking dialogue between Sheila and Ben, centered around the concept of time. Through their exchange, the poem delves into deeper questions about the nature of existence and the significance of time in our lives.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 10:55 AM
Thanks my friend. I appreciate your visit.
Jones Avatar
March 25, 2024 at 11:38 PM
Clever engaging and great personification Richard!
Lamoureux Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 4:27 AM
Much appreciated Karen.
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