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Sheila asked him “Do you have the time?” Ben answered “It’s five after two.” She responded “That is a perfectly good answer, but that is not the answer to my question.” He responded “I’m sorry, I don’t understand, you don’t want to know the time?” “That’s right.” Sheila said. “I asked, " Do you have the time?” Ben looked perplexed “The time for what?” Sheila’s eyebrow raised just a bit, “Well that’s up to you isn’t it?” Big Ben paused for just a second. “Wasn’t his whole existence about time?” Over a Hundred and sixty years he had been marking time. In fact the people of London have always looked up to him. Who was she to question him about time? Because of her he lost a second. How would he get it back? He thought a bit more, “That was the first second he had ever had to himself!” I guess Sheila will get her answer afterall, he does indeed have the time. In the end a Clock can’t make time but perhaps one named Ben can keep some for himself.

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Date: 4/24/2024 12:12:00 AM
I love this personification ot time I guess we need each other as earthing else does to survive, time needs us to record it and we need time in our lives. Awesome poem my friend,hope you are keeping well Blessings Jennifer
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/24/2024 12:59:00 PM
You as well. Thanks for the visit and comment.
Date: 4/19/2024 1:23:00 PM
lol this is so creative, Richard :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/20/2024 7:37:00 PM
Thanks, I had fun writing it.
Date: 4/11/2024 2:15:00 AM
Interesting write perhaps with a different answer if time wasn’t considered linear! Lol . . . I’m musing! Great write as ever fella.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/11/2024 6:42:00 AM
Thanks for giving it a read.
Date: 4/5/2024 2:44:00 AM
Great personification. Time is essential. We need it every day.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/5/2024 6:29:00 AM
Or maybe time needs us? Otherwise who would mark and record its passing?
Date: 3/27/2024 11:59:00 AM
Thanks for the visit, Richard. I'm glad I read this piece tonight. Thanks for drawing me back. I should always make time for friends like you! Creative piece. I enjoyed it.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/27/2024 12:04:00 PM
Nice to see you. If you have a chance read my “Obsessed” I think it’s in your wheelhouse. ;0)
Date: 3/27/2024 10:45:00 AM
How clever is this personification! I absolutely love the way youv written and delivered this in such a creative manner. “ in the end a clock cant make time” couldnt have said it any better! Pleasure reading this.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/27/2024 12:05:00 PM
Thanks, I had fun writing this one.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/27/2024 12:04:00 PM
Thanks, I had fun writing this one.
Date: 3/26/2024 11:10:00 PM
Very unique poetry, Richard. I always thought Big Ben was from the 1800s. But I guess it must be younger than I imagined!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/27/2024 5:25:00 AM
It was built in 1859. Thanks for giving this one a read Andrea. ;0)
Date: 3/26/2024 9:31:00 PM
Indeed Big Ben also needs a little time for himself. For the past hundred and odd years, he has been working relentlessly. First I thought this was a conversation between a husband and wife. You have a unique way of approaching each topic. I enjoyed reading your semi-humorous poem, dear Richard.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/27/2024 5:26:00 AM
That was what aI was going for. Thanks for giving my poem a read.
Date: 3/26/2024 8:50:00 PM
This poem was enjoyable. I guess it's similar to "do you have a minute?".
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/27/2024 8:54:00 AM
Hahaha ok, I get it.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/27/2024 7:28:00 AM
"I want to talk with you. Do you have a minute?" People say it all the time.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/26/2024 9:04:00 PM
Thanks for giving it a read. What is “do you have a minute?”
Date: 3/26/2024 5:43:00 AM
Clever and playful. Big Ben deserves a vacation. Maybe Belize?
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/26/2024 10:54:00 AM
Good idea or maybe Benagil Beach in Portugal? Thanksfor giving my poem a read.
Date: 3/26/2024 5:40:00 AM
Your personification presents a clever and thought-provoking dialogue between Sheila and Ben, centered around the concept of time. Through their exchange, the poem delves into deeper questions about the nature of existence and the significance of time in our lives.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/26/2024 10:55:00 AM
Thanks my friend. I appreciate your visit.
Date: 3/25/2024 11:38:00 PM
Clever engaging and great personification Richard!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/26/2024 4:27:00 AM
Much appreciated Karen.

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