Time

Spring Time pretty flowers in my garden will start to grow, do you see the old huge black crow. Summer Time with lots of outdoor fun, watch out or you will get burned by the bright sun. Autumn Time is for picking and baking apple pies, maybe this year I will win a prize. Winter Time is when the ground is covered with fluffy snow, the cold winds howl, swirl and blow.

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Valsa George

Date: 3/12/2024 2:07:00 AM

Seasons come and go in time. Each season is characterized by some change in nature and meant for different activities. If summer is for outdoor fun, autumn is for fruit picking. Spring is for gardening and winter is for skiing and skating. Beautiful poem dear Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/12/2024 7:58:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "Time" write to be a Beautiful poem. Time will bring a new season. Now spring to enjoy before the hot summer. Have a blessed/fun day writing away..........

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/9/2024 7:14:00 PM

I like how you've found something wonderful about each season. Good for you. I struggle mightily with winter. ~ Curmudgeon

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/10/2024 8:29:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Time" write. Say goodbye to winter/spring is almost here. Hooray!!!! Have a blessed/fun day writing away..........

I Am Anaya

Date: 3/8/2024 12:29:00 AM

a perfect rhyme runs thru time, seasons change giving us what you've described! Clever Paula, Grat entry! Hugs~Anaya

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/8/2024 8:20:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "Time" write to be a perfect rhyme/clever. It was a fun rhyme to write. Hugs... Have a blessed/fun day writing away..........

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 3/6/2024 4:43:00 PM

Wow, such lovely, picturesque images presented themselves through your words! Your poem took me on such a delightful meander through the seasons. A wonderful and sweet poem Paula. <3 :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/8/2024 8:17:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "Time" write to be a wonderful/sweet poem. It was a fun one to write. Have a blessed/fun day writing away..........

Karen Croft

Date: 3/6/2024 3:47:00 PM

I like how you expressed each season!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/8/2024 8:13:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my fun "Time" write. I love the spring the best... Have a blessed/fun day writing away..........

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/6/2024 1:24:00 PM

You remind me of a graceful ice skater. Through the season with.. and you hit on the Highpoint of each one. Thank you for writing this. I think it’s so pleasant and calming Pangie

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/8/2024 8:09:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "Time" write to be so pleasant/calming. I enjoyed writing this one. Have a blessed/fun day writing away..........

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/6/2024 12:30:00 PM

Nice one carrying us through the seasons. I hope you win a prize on the apple pie. There must be a contest going on about time because I have seen several about time. If so, your work reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/8/2024 7:45:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my fun "Time" write. Yes, a time contest is on. I do not do apple pie baking contests. I do love apple pie. Have a blessed/fun day writing away..........

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/6/2024 9:42:00 AM

Very nice walk through the seasons. Time is precious. You have shown it well. I have a huge black crow around lately. Today when it flew , loud whooshing could be heard from its wings. I hope you have a nice day. :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/8/2024 7:42:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Time" write. No huge black crow here. Guess he left. Hahaha!!! Have a blessed/fun day writing away..........

Jay Narain

Date: 3/6/2024 9:36:00 AM

A nice review of seasons of time.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/8/2024 7:38:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my fun "Time" write. Have a blessed/fun day writing away..........

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/5/2024 1:37:00 PM

I enjoyed your 'seasonal' spin on time. I love baking apple pies...any season. Have a great evening, hugs, Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/6/2024 8:55:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Time" write. You are baking??? Spring With Warm Apple Pie. Hooray!!! Let me know when to come over... Hahaha!!! Have a blessed/fun day writing away..........

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/5/2024 1:00:00 PM

a cute one about the seasons of time, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/6/2024 8:52:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "Time" to be a cute write. I wanted to do something different. Have a blessed/fun day writing away..........

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/5/2024 12:54:00 PM

Paula, Your delightful poem beautifully captures the essence of springtime, imbuing it with vivid imagery. Moreover, today's weather has been nothing short of splendid, serving as a delightful tribute to the ever-changing seasons. Well done, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/6/2024 8:51:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun write/tribute to the changing seasons. It is good your weather has been great. Spring Hooray!!! Have a blessed/fun day writing away..........

Deb M

Date: 3/5/2024 12:26:00 PM

A lovely little celebration of all the seasons Paula! I enjoyed this happy poem! Debx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/6/2024 8:47:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "Time" write to be a happy poem/lovely little celebration of all the seasons. Have a blessed/fun day writing away.........

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/5/2024 11:29:00 AM

HI Paula i have just posted a Springtime poem although we have just entered Autumn. The Summer days have been so hot this year that i am welcoming cooler weather. Summer is fun and one can sit out on their patios or in their garden and smell the sweet blossoms and flowers. This is an awesome poem Paula and I wish you lots and lots of luck in the contest. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/6/2024 8:43:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your lots and lots of Luck. Glad you found my fun "Time" write to be an awesome poem. We are starting to get spring. I love spring/autumn the best. They never last very long/so sad. Hugs... Have a blessed/fun day writing away..........

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/5/2024 10:50:00 AM

- Now is the time of spring ... and we had a lovely day today, Paula ... I worked a little in my garden ... a wonderful time ... good luck in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/6/2024 8:38:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your Good Luck. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Time" write. Sounds like you had a fun day working in your garden. How about a picture with one of your lovely writes??? I wish I had a garden. I love pink roses. Hugs... Have a blessed/fun day writing away..........

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/5/2024 8:15:00 AM

Time~Date Written 3/5/2024