Time

“Time is money” “Time heals all wounds” “Time is what you make of it” Truth, somewhere in the ticking corridors we daily and nightly transverse (Poe said brightly and dimly dreaming) -- ticking echoes of walls man does not see beyond without visual aids of Faith...death the sign of exit. Time is a game of Hide-n-Seek. Life may not be the only conscious player….

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/8/2023 2:02:00 PM

Time is a game of hide and seek and life may not be a conscious player...Wise words penned.We should never take this beautiful life for granted...Time is indeed a game..We all have to play in...Fantastic poem...May we use our time wisely.

Joe Dimino
Date: 10/8/2023 2:43:00 PM

Thank you, Charmaine; lovely, wise comment. Blessings.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/8/2023 7:12:00 AM

No one knows the day, hour, or circumstances of our end on this earth, but praise God, I know Him Who knows and is a just and loving God. I enjoyed reading this one today and I think quite a bit about time and what length that I have left here on this earth. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Joe Dimino
Date: 10/8/2023 1:44:00 PM

Well said, Sara; thank you for your thoughtful, wise comment. Blessings.

Silent One

Date: 10/6/2023 11:12:00 AM

You had me singing Simon and Garfunkel song, time, time what has become of me... you always write with such wisdom my friend... great ending.

Joe Dimino
Date: 10/6/2023 3:39:00 PM

Thank you, Si; you made my day. Blessings!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/6/2023 7:37:00 AM

Time is but a preparation for us to cross that bridge and hopefully attain heavenly bliss. Blessings.

Joe Dimino
Date: 10/6/2023 9:33:00 AM

Hi Victor; for sure: Time is opportunity...to succeed or fail. What will we do today? Hmm? Thank you my friend. Blessings.