Time
the sun has now set
and in deep grey gown, the day
glides through stars quiet
time keeps galloping ahead
as a racing horse, tireless
(I haven't understood this form correctly. Those who read please tell if my tanka meets the standards!)
Copyright © Valsa George | Year Posted 2022
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