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As the future comes to be our present, each moment lived is our past. Even if the ticking of the clock stops, it remains infinite. Is it even linear? Only the mind of our Eternal Father can fathom TIME. July 4, 2020 for the the 'Time- 8 Word Challenge' Poetry Contest of Dear Heart

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Date: 7/7/2020 4:21:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my time contest, excellent writing and a FAV for me _Constance
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Date: 7/7/2020 3:20:00 PM
An excellent Etheree, Andrea. You certainly rose to the challenge! Congratulations on placing first. Regards // paul
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Date: 7/7/2020 1:53:00 PM
Ah! The concept of time not being a linear entity is such a fascinating one. Congratulations on your win for this brilliant thought Andrea :)
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Date: 7/7/2020 12:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Yes, love your line, "Only the mind of our Eternal Father can fathom TIME." So true. Enjoy your win and day.............
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Date: 7/7/2020 12:11:00 AM
Back with congratulations Andrea.. Well deserved win..
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Date: 7/6/2020 9:33:00 PM
A wonderfully composed etheree, Andrea, congrats on your win. John
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Date: 7/6/2020 9:28:00 PM
Excellent etheree for Dear Heart's contest, Andrea - congrats!
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Date: 7/6/2020 8:04:00 PM
Love this and your other etheree (lol) that I have read--never would I have thought that a school teacher would garner a grin on this Hawaiian's face--succinctly well-phrased, Andrea, my compliments truly on your successful endeavors of placing 1st -- Aloha~@William
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Date: 7/6/2020 1:08:00 PM
In our existence time passes quickly or slowly depending on our age. I remember being young and thinking Time went by so slowly it seemed summer took forever to arrive when we would have summer vacation from school. Now that I am older time seems to fly by at warp speed. A great poem to contemplate and a wonderful entry for the contest. xxoo
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Date: 7/5/2020 12:29:00 AM
Wow.. Profound Etheree.. Great entry in the contest Andrea.. Good luck..
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Date: 7/4/2020 10:10:00 PM
Time cannot be grasped or explained yet you have done both Andrea.
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Date: 7/4/2020 6:36:00 PM
you wove the words in so brilliantly Andrea, not sure if I have time to finish my poem lol!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/4/2020 4:58:00 PM
Well written Andrea, Looked at doing an etheree but gave up, you've composed this really well. Happy 4th july Good luck in the contest Tom
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Date: 7/4/2020 4:51:00 PM
You are the queen of etherees...
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