Time

"Time soars without pinions,don't squander your valuable seconds by attempting to trap it" One,two,three... Keeps ticking the Clock. Time cannot be locked, as it rolls on very fast. Every moment is precious, Learn to enjoy your present: and discard the bitter past. Infinite will be your claim, to accomplish your aim: Bathe in eternal happy rain, In life's enduring game. 1-7-2020 Second place in the Contest. Note:TIME -8 word challenge poetry Contest. Sponsored by A Dear Heart.

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Constance La France

Date: 7/7/2020 4:40:00 PM

Deepa, congratulations on your win in my time contest, wonderful writing _Constance

V. Deepa
Date: 7/8/2020 2:54:00 PM

Hello mam, Thankyou very much.:-) I am glad to know that my muse impressed you:-) You do a great job organising contests.Keep writing.Keep inspiring.:-) Take care.Much love~Deepa:-)

Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/7/2020 2:12:00 PM

Love the upbeat message in your muse Deepa. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and love :)

V. Deepa
Date: 7/8/2020 2:51:00 PM

Hello Aditi mam, Thanks a lot for your uplifting words.I truly cherish your graceful appreciation:-)Receiving your blessings and love always I bloat in Glee.:-);-) Best wishes.Much love to you too:-*

Jenish Somadas

Date: 7/7/2020 1:22:00 AM

Bathe in eternal happy rain.. lovely poem Deepa.. Congrats on you wonderful win..

V. Deepa
Date: 7/8/2020 2:48:00 PM

Hello Jenish sir, Thankyou very much for the appreciation and wonderful feedback.:-) I am similar to you in one way ie,highlighting lines of the poems.Its nice to share this lovely habit with you.:-) Best wishes for all your works:-) Take care.Warmest regards ~Deepa

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/3/2020 5:45:00 AM

This one rises to the occasion and the winners circle I believe.

V. Deepa
Date: 7/3/2020 1:20:00 PM

Hello Caren mam, Thankyou very much for your generous appreciation and encouragement.:-) Best wishes for you too. Take care.Have a nice day ~Deepa:-)

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 7/1/2020 3:05:00 PM

What a wonderful write on time. Good luck in the contest.

V. Deepa
Date: 7/3/2020 3:25:00 AM

Hello Jeanne mam, Thankyou very much for your lovely appreciation and blessings:-). Best wishes for you too. Enjoy your day.:-) Warmest regards~Deepa