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Tidal Locking

© Dr. Upma A. Sharma Tidal locking Like waxing and waning of moon, his love shuddered, The tidal locking that hampered my zing, Effulgent life lost in darker side of silvery moon. In its brightness drowned my shimmer, Then it abated into a sickle to slice my pride, Forlorn, I chose to live by the dark side of the moon. Consumed by its force, deep on this side of earth where peace calls my name I lean and stay, over the reflection of waves on the dark side of the moon The horizon rips my heart two bodies weaken by its physical use, and tidal locking Welcoming and affecting everything On the dark side of the moon Written August 11th, 2015 Contest- collaboration celebration contest I am Thankful to Linda for contributing last two stanzas that have made it amazingly meaningful and beautiful. ~ A poet destroyer collaboration~ Tidal locking- tidal forces from Earth slow down rotation of moon and the same side faces the earth. The other side, the darker side always remains dark.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/6/2015 12:25:00 AM
Hello my very dear friend, Dr. Upma! This is absolutely an amazing collaboration by you and our dearest friend, Linda. I like it so much! Many warm Congratulations on your win! Many hugs and cheers! I'll fave it if you don't mind. Thank you sooo much. love lots, Leonora
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Date: 9/4/2015 11:25:00 PM
Love this light and dark write. Congrats on such creative verses and smooth flow!!
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Date: 9/3/2015 12:10:00 PM
This is beautiful and deftly woven together! The dark side of the moon is uniquely treated. ~ Congratulations for this collaboration that sits deservedly on the winners' list! // paul
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Date: 9/3/2015 8:04:00 AM
Hey Dr. Upma, BIG congratulations on your win in Linda's amazing contest! This is a truly excellent collaboration between the both of you - deep and expansive emotions locked in together. Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 9/3/2015 7:57:00 AM
What a wonderful collaboration so brilliantly done! I just love it! Congratulations on the well-deserved win! Pandita
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Date: 9/3/2015 12:06:00 AM
Dr. Upma A. Sharma, BIG congratulations on your wonderful win! An absolutely brilliant work of art with collaboration with Linda Well done. Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/2/2015 9:08:00 PM
Great winning co-write Dr Upma... Congrats
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Date: 9/2/2015 5:49:00 PM
Dr Upma, Congratulations on your win.-----SKAT
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Date: 9/2/2015 3:17:00 PM
a lovely collaboration Linda and Dr Sharma many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/2/2015 2:44:00 PM
Dr Upma, Congratulations on your awesome win. I'm overwhelmed on the outcome of every poem. Stop by my latest blog "MY FELLINGS" or my newest poem "FLESH" if you'd like or have time. I'd like to post the collaboration on my poem list in the near future with your permission. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/14/2015 12:18:00 AM
That's succinct - I enjoyed it. Julia, with best wishes.
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Date: 8/12/2015 11:33:00 AM
Upma, a beautiful collaboration A7 and thanks for visiting my poem, Silence ...
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Date: 8/11/2015 5:13:00 PM
a wonderful pen by you both Dr Upma hope it does well hugs 7
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