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Thursdays Recalled By the Family's French Fry Girl

The number of us children growing up was eight. Each Thursday night was special, for our Dad got paid, and we would eagerly and hungrily await his bringing Henry’s fries and burgers home. Hurray! We weren’t allowed to pick and choose; we had to take two burgers each with “everything” and one bag of fries. While we grabbed our own allotment, happy to partake, Jenny scraped off from her burgers -onions she despised! Dori chewed so slowly, from her we all would steal. The baby, Theadora, just sat there and played with her food. I was strange and always made this deal: Both my burgers for two brothers’ French fries I would trade. And so the number of my French fries always came to three. Even with no burgers, I loved each Thursday night. for the Henry’s fast food and time with family. Oh, to go back to those days with loved ones in my sight!
*Henry's Hamburgers was the name of a fast food place in my hometown For Paula Swanson's "Traditions" Poetry Contest

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Date: 12/20/2011 6:38:00 PM
This was a wonderful tradition, Andrea. Nothing like family being together, sharing...that's what it's all about. Congratulations and thanks. Love, Annalise
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Date: 12/19/2011 2:52:00 PM
Andrea congrats on your win, wonderful memories from a wonderful poem..David
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Date: 12/19/2011 1:55:00 PM
Really nice. Congratulations on your big no. 2. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/19/2011 1:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Paula's "Traditions" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/6/2011 12:16:00 PM
A hint, a glint of yesteryear. We reminicse and have a beer. We tell it with such fond recall. A time we spent when we were all. I am the youngest son of seven. May each of us end up in heaven.
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Date: 12/6/2011 7:46:00 AM
This brings back lots of memories for me too. Though we didn't get much fast food I did and still do love my crispy french fries, though everything we ate was home made. In fact it was even home grown. Great job here my friend. It's so much fun to reminisce through our verse. This should do nicely in the contest. Good Luck. God Bless, JB
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Date: 12/4/2011 5:50:00 PM
Just loved this one Andie! simple joys for me they were hard and are hard to remember because my Dad seemed almost never to come home..you were very lucky! Light & Love
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Date: 12/4/2011 4:30:00 PM
A nostalgic write about family tradition.Enjoyed.Those moments of childhood days are always special.
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Date: 12/4/2011 3:20:00 PM
LOL, no wonder your brothers happily traded with you! Yes, some childhood memories are so precious, aren't they? A sure winner
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Date: 12/4/2011 2:31:00 PM
It is nice to have such special memories that you all shared growing up. Made me recall some of the special things I did with my brothers and sister. love phyl
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Date: 12/4/2011 11:54:00 AM
Some really beautiful memories shared in this piece A perfect entry for the contest. Made me recall my Xmas memories. Love to you always Michael
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Date: 12/4/2011 8:33:00 AM
funny how family's have their own special treats but it seems the togetherness was the best part. I can remember when my son was 2 and we worked in the yard together all day he would say "It was a fun day today ain't it?"
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Date: 12/4/2011 6:20:00 AM
Andrea, I enjoyed this peek into your family time on a Thursday.. You made me smile with this gem ;) wishing you the best for the contest, love W
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Date: 12/3/2011 2:50:00 PM
This is a family memory I can relate to. My kids used to ask if I had enough money in my jeans to go out to eat. A rare treat when they were little and sometimes the answer was no. Thank you for this memory.
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Date: 12/3/2011 12:28:00 PM
wow! Andrea, this is a true story... and i bet you truly miss them days.. i can not picture the frnch fry gal... however i enjoyed,.. have yourself a wonderful day..always,..p.d.
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Date: 12/3/2011 10:06:00 AM
And here was me thinking how fast food was supposed to do you no good, yet Andrea;) it "seems" has thriven on the stuff... i think you should go write a poem or do something" but then darn...anything she does is bound to be good:) Ha Ha... enjoyed the scribe here Andrea:)
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Date: 12/3/2011 9:33:00 AM
Isn't it funny how these simple things can make a lasting memory that captures some of the happiest times in our lives? Our favorite place was called "Hal's Eat 'Em Up" !!!
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Date: 12/3/2011 8:53:00 AM
Enjoyed reading a moment or moments in time with your family...Reads like a winner..Do you still love those fries?..Thanks for the kind reviews..I am glad that you got a laugh about the smoors..Bufford Buzzard's mom told him, " Bufford you can eat anything if you just put enough catsup on it"...Sara
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Date: 12/3/2011 4:39:00 AM
Andrea this sounds like it was everyone's birthday every Thursday, good fun, good luck..David
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Date: 12/2/2011 10:59:00 PM
What a fantastic tradition to have and to remember! It's funny cause you always traded for the french fries over your hamburgers! I always traded whatever I had for pizza! Same idea, different food! I really liked your write Andrea! It brought back some memories of my own, like the pizza! Great Work with your poem!!
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Date: 12/2/2011 10:54:00 PM
Oh, so you are a french Fry Girl, eh? I like that :) Mmmm now I want so hot, crisp french fries-- I really enjoyed the nostalgic feel you put in here-- heehee I could imagine though how your brother were happy with the trade? I hope you're having a good day, Andrea :) and congrats on all your wins (eep I don't think i can go through the winner's list right now...) hugs to you!! :D
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Date: 12/2/2011 10:53:00 PM
I wrote about a chain of hamburger places called "Five Guys". If I have not posted it yet for everyone to see, I will. Your poem is written very well.
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Date: 12/2/2011 10:46:00 PM
What a delightful poem. My mouth salivated as I read it. So much so, that i got into my car and drove to McDonald's to purchase some fries and and two burgers. I thought of you as I ate them. Thanks fo rsharing, Jancarl C.
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