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Thunderbolts and lighting, very very frightening Thunder crashing above my head I am child scared in his bed I see bright flashes in the sky I shiver and worry am I to die? I see the terror in my mothers’ eyes My father trying hard to show no fear I may be small but I am perplexed No rain is falling, none at all? Again and again the thunder rolls My father whispers silently This storm is taking its toll Flashes still light up the night The dawn is rising, a sleepless night Although the thunder still over head I hear the rumblings, of what must be tank treads Soldiers marching, shooting at random This is a storm I did not fathom I closed my eyes, please don’t blame me As the roof fell and crushed my hopes I am now alone, staring up at a soldiers boot I am shaking, bullets and angry faces, I shiver in fear He points his gun, his face but a ghost My mother and father, I know have departed They watch above for my early arrival The soldier turns, all of a sudden He marches forth to bring hell a new I am shaking still, and don’t you doubt I wonder why he left little me about? I am alone No food no water No mother no father I am a shell I am tomorrow’s soldier

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Date: 7/7/2014 12:02:00 AM
The child seems too aware, there should be only shock I would think, the pale face of his mother in the rubble perhaps. He would be wondering why she does not answer his calls, not imagining that she waits for him in heaven. The last stanza would be better perhaps as a Greek chorus commenting, or even the voice of God (who knows these things.)
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Date: 7/4/2014 2:38:00 AM
There is such great imagery in this one, Arthur. The winds of war are the most destructive force on this planet. Those that lust for power are always moving in the direction that will hurt all that get in their path. For a child to have to go through such is a horrible thing and your last line is so powerful. Great poem, my friend.... Robert.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/4/2014 11:07:00 PM
Thanks Robert, your comments are nice to read!
Date: 6/30/2014 8:30:00 PM
Another good one. I do believe you are a good soldier. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/4/2014 11:06:00 PM
Very kind of you Lucilla! Thanks
Date: 6/30/2014 7:22:00 PM
A powerful write Arthur bravo, it makes me think of world war 2 and the orphans of war, the soldiers of tomorrow great imagery nicely done, loved every line. Thank you also for your comment it means alot Arthur take care cheri
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/4/2014 11:05:00 PM
And thank you kindly Cherl, hope all is well with you!
Date: 6/30/2014 6:50:00 PM
This is a great write!!!! War is terrible , tragic, deadly, costly and unstoppable since man has fallen. Greed, lust and power make it so...
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/19/2014 10:18:00 PM
Thanks Robert, and yes it is, and when you see the suffering first hand, its hard to believe we humans can do this to each other.
Date: 6/30/2014 11:21:00 AM
i remember the declamation piece I have done before and it's theme like this.. :( this sad so sad tragic and very traumatic experience for a child... God touched the hearts of those persons behind those cruel acts.. :(
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/4/2014 11:04:00 PM
Thanks Olive, I like so much your way of thinking!
Date: 6/30/2014 9:18:00 AM
Wow arthur, powerful. I love your stories sugar, you tell amazing ones, (hugs)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/30/2014 8:08:00 PM
You are as sweet as honey! Thank you
Date: 6/30/2014 7:45:00 AM
I cant imagine anything more terrifying as an adult so for a child it must be horrendous. A wonderful thought provoking poem Arthur. Hugs Jan xxx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/30/2014 8:08:00 PM
Thanks so much Jan, Much appreciated
Date: 6/30/2014 12:42:00 AM
Guns and grenades will never solve our problems.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/4/2014 11:03:00 PM
That's true, but seems we never stop trying anyways!
Date: 6/29/2014 11:28:00 PM
How horrific for a child to go through this...sadly it happens all the time...Great write my friend
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/30/2014 11:19:00 AM
arthur always say part 2 :o but he doesn't do so.. :(
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Tim Smith
Date: 6/29/2014 11:43:00 PM
Can't wait
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/29/2014 11:34:00 PM
Thanks Tim, if all goes well there is a part 2 :)

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