Thunder

Thunderbolts and lighting, very very frightening

Thunder crashing above my head
I am child scared in his bed
I see bright flashes in the sky
I shiver and worry am I to die?

I see the terror in my mothers’ eyes
My father trying hard to show no fear
I may be small but I am perplexed
No rain is falling, none at all?

Again and again the thunder rolls
My father whispers silently
This storm is taking its toll
Flashes still light up the night

The dawn is rising, a sleepless night
Although the thunder still over head
I hear the rumblings, of what must be tank treads
Soldiers marching, shooting at random

This is a storm I did not fathom
I closed my eyes, please don’t blame me
As the roof fell and crushed my hopes
I am now alone, staring up at a soldiers boot

I am shaking, bullets and angry faces, I shiver in fear
He points his gun, his face but a ghost
My mother and father, I know have departed
They watch above for my early arrival

The soldier turns, all of a sudden
He marches forth to bring hell a new
I am shaking still, and don’t you doubt
I wonder why he left little me about?

I am alone
No food no water
No mother no father
I am a shell

I am tomorrow’s soldier
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Johnston Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 12:02 AM
The child seems too aware, there should be only shock I would think, the pale face of his mother in the rubble perhaps. He would be wondering why she does not answer his calls, not imagining that she waits for him in heaven. The last stanza would be better perhaps as a Greek chorus commenting, or even the voice of God (who knows these things.)
Nehls Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 2:38 AM
There is such great imagery in this one, Arthur. The winds of war are the most destructive force on this planet. Those that lust for power are always moving in the direction that will hurt all that get in their path. For a child to have to go through such is a horrible thing and your last line is so powerful. Great poem, my friend.... Robert.
Vaso Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 11:07 PM
Thanks Robert, your comments are nice to read!
Carrillo Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 8:30 PM
Another good one. I do believe you are a good soldier. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
Vaso Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 11:06 PM
Very kind of you Lucilla! Thanks
Dunn Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 7:22 PM
A powerful write Arthur bravo, it makes me think of world war 2 and the orphans of war, the soldiers of tomorrow great imagery nicely done, loved every line. Thank you also for your comment it means alot Arthur take care cheri
Vaso Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 11:05 PM
And thank you kindly Cherl, hope all is well with you!
Lindley Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 6:50 PM
This is a great write!!!! War is terrible , tragic, deadly, costly and unstoppable since man has fallen. Greed, lust and power make it so...
Vaso Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 10:18 PM
Thanks Robert, and yes it is, and when you see the suffering first hand, its hard to believe we humans can do this to each other.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 11:21 AM
i remember the declamation piece I have done before and it's theme like this.. :( this sad so sad tragic and very traumatic experience for a child... God touched the hearts of those persons behind those cruel acts.. :(
Vaso Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 11:04 PM
Thanks Olive, I like so much your way of thinking!
Nance Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 9:18 AM
Wow arthur, powerful. I love your stories sugar, you tell amazing ones, (hugs)
Vaso Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 8:08 PM
You are as sweet as honey! Thank you
United Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 7:45 AM
I cant imagine anything more terrifying as an adult so for a child it must be horrendous. A wonderful thought provoking poem Arthur. Hugs Jan xxx
Vaso Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 8:08 PM
Thanks so much Jan, Much appreciated
Pen Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 12:42 AM
Guns and grenades will never solve our problems.
Vaso Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 11:03 PM
That's true, but seems we never stop trying anyways!
Smith Avatar
June 29, 2014 at 11:28 PM
How horrific for a child to go through this...sadly it happens all the time...Great write my friend
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 11:19 AM
arthur always say part 2 :o but he doesn't do so.. :(
Smith Avatar
June 29, 2014 at 11:43 PM
Can't wait
Vaso Avatar
June 29, 2014 at 11:34 PM
Thanks Tim, if all goes well there is a part 2 :)
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