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Thrown Out Words

The sun is bearing down   warming up this skin   heat is radiating     but I'm bitter cold     words thrown out   the window   floating with the breeze     anyone out there listening   or am I just inside talking, alone to me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/2/2018 12:46:00 PM
Hello Tim,sometimes it is good to be lonely. You can think clearly. But at times loneliness hurts. Carole is right you are not alone. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 1/26/2018 9:03:00 PM
This is painfully relatable. You are not alone.
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Date: 1/26/2018 7:08:00 PM
Ah This sure resonates, such depth in few words, again, beautiful.
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Date: 1/26/2018 11:01:00 AM
Wow. This is very beautifully written. I feel the same way at times....So true. Great write, dear.
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Date: 1/25/2018 9:11:00 PM
I'm listening too...even loneliness can be an inspiration...but you are not really alone, Tim.
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Date: 1/25/2018 7:02:00 PM
I'm here, listening! :) A heartfelt poem my friend. <3
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Date: 1/25/2018 5:48:00 PM
I'm listening Tim but sometimes silence is deafening ... a very sad ending to your poem:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/25/2018 4:37:00 PM
Very clever..well executed!
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