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Three Stops

“A body can’t do everything,” frets Grandma. Hannah instantly joins kinswoman, laying monogrammed napkins, opening peas quickly. Reluctantlyly stopping, turns unto visitors. “Who xrates young zucchini?” ----------------------------- R ashly he didn’t stop A t the railroad crossing I t is known that he was seen L ots of liquor tossing. R oaring train just couldn’t stop. O nward it sped ahead. A t the crossing a big crash! D rinking dude is dead! C rying relatives bemoan R ashness of young Moses. O n his casket they have lain S ome red and yellow roses. S igns and signals cannot stop I nattentive losers N o words of wisdom enough for G uys who are driving boozers. __________________________ Cheerful Carolyn carries coffee in capacious cups from coffee shop. Whiny Willie wails for water. Susan snappishly shouts , “Stop”.

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Date: 7/19/2011 3:19:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest with these three different views of 'stop'...
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Date: 7/19/2011 11:39:00 AM
Many congratulations, Joyce : )
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Date: 7/19/2011 7:37:00 AM
congrats on a well deserved glowing award! grrreat stuff, dear joyce... : ) huggs
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Date: 7/19/2011 5:29:00 AM
Congratulations Joyce on your win in Debbie Guzzi's "Aye, Aye, and A Mistress"contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/18/2011 7:14:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your spectacular winning poem in the contest.. a great piece... a wonderful creation my friend.. luv..
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Date: 6/29/2011 7:12:00 PM
a GENIUS you ARE!!
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Date: 6/26/2011 12:44:00 PM
Amazing how well you did the alliteration. There is an alternate Soup definition for this form and I'll be using it. Great message in the acrostic and the alliteration had me laughing. Glad the "cheerful" one bears my name, but I'd hate to be Whiny Willie or Snappish Susan. Very cool entry for Sue's contest. I'd give this a high place. Creative, makes sense and even gives us smiles with the ABC and the Alliteration. Wish people would pay more heed to the message in the acrostic. Love, CD
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Date: 6/24/2011 5:15:00 PM
Very well done Joyce; I know you'll place high in the contest. Awesome...
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Date: 6/23/2011 9:18:00 PM
these are all very good, good luck in the contest. cory
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Date: 6/23/2011 6:52:00 AM
This contest has me confused..not so hard to do...lol..good job..your right on...BG
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Date: 6/22/2011 11:13:00 PM
MY GOODNESS, you really went to town on this theme of stop. I did not have a clue what that contest meant. Gosh, how cool this is. I bet you score high!
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Date: 6/22/2011 9:11:00 PM
u did a magnificent job with the three forms Joyce.. I am polishing my entry up a bit and probably post tomorrow... good luck in Deb's new contest ..this is very clever my friend.. luv..
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