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Threads of Darkness

These stitches of darkness are coming undone at the seams i feel the threads trailing like breath on the winds of frigid night i stand stranded in the tangles of spools of past unraveling the knots trying to mend the moonless sky and seal its tears with fate’s hands before i seal my eyes and bid farewell to this night wondering if i will see tomorrow’s rise or will time cut these threads and take me through the frays of darkness undone at my own seams

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Date: 6/16/2020 2:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. You are a beautiful writer. Enjoy your win and day..........
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Date: 10/22/2019 8:38:00 PM
Happy belated Birthday Sandra. Hugs Rick.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/23/2019 9:33:00 AM
Thank you so much Rick :) hugs
Date: 10/22/2019 8:37:00 PM
Fortunately you have not become undone. Blessings Rick.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/23/2019 9:33:00 AM
i am still here....my muse is silent...but i am here... thanks Rick :)
Date: 10/21/2019 1:30:00 PM
Wonderful write Sandy, you are not your brother,sadly he's gone, but that does not portend your demise. My sister died at my age from lung disease, which I have also. I admit it does cross my mind from time to time, but I remember I'm not her, I live a different life and will have a better future. Take care of yourself and you will be fine!
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Date: 10/21/2019 7:00:00 PM
Thank you John, i went to bed thinking i was fine, i guess being today is my birthday my muse was singing when i was trying to sleep, this was one of those dark, late night pennings through my phone because my pc was shut down for the night....i guess deep inner hidden thoughts came to light briefly... thank you my friend :) hugs
Date: 10/21/2019 7:52:00 AM
I for one hope that you see tomorrow's (today's) sunrise and every other that brings a new morning far into the future. This felt sad but there is a tomorrow that is waiting for you.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/21/2019 10:26:00 AM
thank you my friend...birthday blues i guess... the sun did rise beautifully...i guess my mind stirs with those gone more so at times like this... hugs
Date: 10/21/2019 1:21:00 AM
A gorgeous poem Sandra. Nicely done!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/21/2019 10:24:00 AM
Thanks...my muse was stirring with this when i was trying to gain sleep
Date: 10/20/2019 11:33:00 PM
I will stay up stitching, my friend ~ no worries. And I will use some very special thread! Sleep peacefully ~ may you experience warmth this upcoming day (regardless of the weather ~ hugs :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/21/2019 10:23:00 AM
Thank you my friend...guess my mind was stirring with my brother's death again.... hugs :) today rose beautifully
Date: 10/20/2019 10:54:00 PM
Love your style, Sandra. Wonderful poem.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/21/2019 10:22:00 AM
Thank you so much Line... this one wrote itself when i was trying to sleep... hugs

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