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My Darling, I,m sorry, I,ve held you too closely Our love has been bound in threads of control I cling to my threads weaved intricately Desperately grasping to keep me whole Fear is my navigator, guiding me from my soul Fear beckons to pull you in while chasing me away I anxiously struggle to free my grip in hopes you will stay Our life together deceased; I,ve sadly shattered our dreams Fear has led to our demise; my thread,s beginning to fray The threads which scarcely bind us, pulling apart at the seams I know my threads have cut you much deeper than a knife Each thread slicing deeper than all the others before Alas, I know I have caused you suffering and strife My darling, if you please, open our love,s closed door I will show you my fear is a ship on the distant shore If you give me another chance, love will be our thread alone I will hold it loosely so we may weave the fabrics sewn Each to give, to take, pushing and pulling, from before and nether So darling, I will meet you anytime, anywhere strange or known on the loose end of the thread holding our hearts together
By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, February 1, 2012 for Thread ~ Free Poetry Contest

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Date: 2/1/2012 10:39:00 PM
wonderfully powerful limnes of emotion Rhonda.. good luck in the contest.. these threads are shining luv..
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/1/2012 10:43:00 PM
Sorry, Linda. I believe you just received my reply to Robert. I do this at least once a day! Thanks for your kind comments. Blessings, Rhonda
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/1/2012 10:42:00 PM
Thanks, Robert!! My first time writing a dizain. I'm not sure if I did it right, but I had fun trying!
Date: 2/1/2012 10:05:00 PM
Great form. I will have to try this sometime. Your writing looks like a fine example of this type of expression.
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